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Love the coolness of shadows when I walk.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery describing the morning.
-A very good concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and provide an encouarging review.
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Jun-2022
Comment from
Teri7
As I read your 5-7-5 poem it made me think of a very cool and slightly breezy walk that is so wonderful. You used great descriptive words and very nice picture to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and provide an encouarging review.
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