Organised Mess
5.7.5 Poem6 total reviews
Comment from JLR
I had to laugh, with tongue in cheek, as aI reflected on our oldest daughter's room that was, like this photo, nearly beyond words to explain. But, survive, we all did flourishingly! This should do well in the contest!
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I had to laugh, with tongue in cheek, as aI reflected on our oldest daughter's room that was, like this photo, nearly beyond words to explain. But, survive, we all did flourishingly! This should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Hmmmmm, somehow this room looks very familiar. I raised two teens and seems to me they fit this description very well. Yes, the floor is there, somewhere.
Fun read.
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Hmmmmm, somehow this room looks very familiar. I raised two teens and seems to me they fit this description very well. Yes, the floor is there, somewhere.
Fun read.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a good poem. The syllable count is on point. However, i wasn't sure what "grot" meant?? The visual fits perfectly and is a scene that makes many parents shake their heads and complain.
I like that the font is easily read and is centered on the large visual. It makes the text more prominent. The colored text also adds to the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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It's a good poem. The syllable count is on point. However, i wasn't sure what "grot" meant?? The visual fits perfectly and is a scene that makes many parents shake their heads and complain.
I like that the font is easily read and is centered on the large visual. It makes the text more prominent. The colored text also adds to the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem some may view as humorous
while others may have to deal with the mess left by teens.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the voting.
Robert
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem some may view as humorous
while others may have to deal with the mess left by teens.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the voting.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very vivid and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. As I was reading it and looking at the picture it made me think of my bedroom with all my writing papers on my desk, in a box, etc. Best wishes in the contest. their
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This is a very vivid and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. As I was reading it and looking at the picture it made me think of my bedroom with all my writing papers on my desk, in a box, etc. Best wishes in the contest. their
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
Tidyness is overrated :-). I often read advice saying how a tidy desk helps one to write - utterly ridiculous. I'm sure it helps some, and that's great, but for others it's completely irrelevant.
I enjoyed your fun piece!
Mike
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Tidyness is overrated :-). I often read advice saying how a tidy desk helps one to write - utterly ridiculous. I'm sure it helps some, and that's great, but for others it's completely irrelevant.
I enjoyed your fun piece!
Mike
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022