Follow Me
He said ...10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, FOLLOW ME, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and denotes a faithful seeker leaning on the promises of his God. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This acrostic poem, FOLLOW ME, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and denotes a faithful seeker leaning on the promises of his God. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Bill. I am glad you like this one. I appreciate your review.
Wendy
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, heartfelt, descriptive, spiritual, and creative. Thank you for author's notes - they speak volumes! I pondered on the theme of this poem. I felt these words were written with love! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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The author's words are clear, heartfelt, descriptive, spiritual, and creative. Thank you for author's notes - they speak volumes! I pondered on the theme of this poem. I felt these words were written with love! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Harmony. I appreciate your lovely words and kind review.
Wendy
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
That is a reward in itself, the fact that we can claim his loving grace. Without it, we all would surely be lost. Trying to mirror his life is commendable yet impossible.
Very nice verse
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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That is a reward in itself, the fact that we can claim his loving grace. Without it, we all would surely be lost. Trying to mirror his life is commendable yet impossible.
Very nice verse
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Gary. I appreciate your thoughtful encouragement.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply faithful and peaceful write where we are never alone when we have our beliefs. A fine acrostic and I wish you luck with the contest, a fine reflection here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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A deeply faithful and peaceful write where we are never alone when we have our beliefs. A fine acrostic and I wish you luck with the contest, a fine reflection here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you Dolly. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt contest. Good form.
I enjoyed reading your poem about the Bible. You have an interesting way with words that is nice. Your chosen words and phrases to follow flow naturally and it's easy to understand. Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -- Novalis
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt contest. Good form.
I enjoyed reading your poem about the Bible. You have an interesting way with words that is nice. Your chosen words and phrases to follow flow naturally and it's easy to understand. Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -- Novalis
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I am glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for reviewing. Appreciated.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
This is an excellent Bible Acrostic poem. You meet all requirements.
Your graphics are beautiful.
Just a suggestion: "Learning his wisdom and truth, praying to (see)."
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Author,
This is an excellent Bible Acrostic poem. You meet all requirements.
Your graphics are beautiful.
Just a suggestion: "Learning his wisdom and truth, praying to (see)."
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hi Cindy, thank you very much for your encouraging review and good wishes. Also for you suggestion. That keeps the line complete in itself, and it is better your way. My thought was running into the next line. "Praying to be ? only reflecting ?" I like your suggestion better, it is a good one. So I have changed it. I wanted to nominate you as a thank you, but I am sorry I have used up my quota.
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You?re welcome, Author!
Comment from Sally Law
I so enjoyed your acrostic poem today, mystery poet. Beautifully penned and illustrated in green a life giving color. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sally :))
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I so enjoyed your acrostic poem today, mystery poet. Beautifully penned and illustrated in green a life giving color. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sally :))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Sally! I am very happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you too for the good wishes.
Comment from MissMerri
This Bible Acrostic is not only beautifully worded, but also artfully presented and doctrinally sound. I am quite sure this will be a winner in the contest. Yes, a certain vote getter, and rightly so. Nice one.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This Bible Acrostic is not only beautifully worded, but also artfully presented and doctrinally sound. I am quite sure this will be a winner in the contest. Yes, a certain vote getter, and rightly so. Nice one.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Wow, I do feel very honoured with such words from you, as you are one of my two favourite poets on this site. Your words are very encouraging (and it would be lovely if you are right!) Thank you so much!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the protagonist's heed to the call made by the Lord for humanity to follow him.
The work highlights her steadfastness on his path and how she resolutely claims HIS LOVING GRACE.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the specified entry requirements for an acrostic poem.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the protagonist's heed to the call made by the Lord for humanity to follow him.
The work highlights her steadfastness on his path and how she resolutely claims HIS LOVING GRACE.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the specified entry requirements for an acrostic poem.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you Lloyd. I appreciate your thoughtful review and the five stars.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a very well written acrostic for the contest. I like that you use a counter in most lines to give each one a considered, thoughtful feel. Very nicely done, and I enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This is a very well written acrostic for the contest. I like that you use a counter in most lines to give each one a considered, thoughtful feel. Very nicely done, and I enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you Mike for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
