The Amazing Heist
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Almost Time."A team of six plan their final heist.
7 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Alie, I swear you detail this so well, I think you may have been a master thief in a past life. This so good. I'm moving on to the next chapter right now. A+
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Alie, I swear you detail this so well, I think you may have been a master thief in a past life. This so good. I'm moving on to the next chapter right now. A+
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much, Liz for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Before I forget thank you for the sixes.
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A+ or 6's don't come easy. I eye these as a teacher...lol
Comment from Pantygynt
This sounds most ingenious. I wonder what they are up to. They could get very hot inside those wet suits. I am intrigued.
Just a couple of small points for your attention.
'...no security what-so-ever.' >> Normally one word - whatsoever.
'This would the inclusion of googles.' >> I think there is a word missing here after would - possibly 'involve'.'
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This sounds most ingenious. I wonder what they are up to. They could get very hot inside those wet suits. I am intrigued.
Just a couple of small points for your attention.
'...no security what-so-ever.' >> Normally one word - whatsoever.
'This would the inclusion of googles.' >> I think there is a word missing here after would - possibly 'involve'.'
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pantygynt for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments. I will fix those in a few seconds.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Allie,
Sorry my friend, I'm coming in cold to this chapter of your story... and I will go and try and get up to speed to piece the story together so far. My apologies for not being around until recently... let's just say, I've had a lot going on, with me and around me. Unfortunately, I've pushed an injured body too far.
Wow, this story of yours sounds very suspenseful.
I enjoyed what I read and the characters involved and can't wait to read on to see how this heist goes.
A couple of adjustments.:
This would '.......' the inclusion of 'googles'... (goggles) I believe you may have skipped a word or two here... and that rotten spell check ?
Wetsuits... one word
Great to be back, hope you are well and thriving... read you soon!
With our thoughts we create...
intense planning.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Hi Allie,
Sorry my friend, I'm coming in cold to this chapter of your story... and I will go and try and get up to speed to piece the story together so far. My apologies for not being around until recently... let's just say, I've had a lot going on, with me and around me. Unfortunately, I've pushed an injured body too far.
Wow, this story of yours sounds very suspenseful.
I enjoyed what I read and the characters involved and can't wait to read on to see how this heist goes.
A couple of adjustments.:
This would '.......' the inclusion of 'googles'... (goggles) I believe you may have skipped a word or two here... and that rotten spell check ?
Wetsuits... one word
Great to be back, hope you are well and thriving... read you soon!
With our thoughts we create...
intense planning.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much James for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments. I fill fix those in a moment.
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My pleasure Allie.
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(Smile)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The preparation here made me smile and they soon will become criminals! I enjoyed the humour and your story is slowly progressing, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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The preparation here made me smile and they soon will become criminals! I enjoyed the humour and your story is slowly progressing, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much my friend for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Did they lose weight because of the wet suits? That certainly would be hard to wear in the peak of summer! I guess you are reaching the climax of the book. I hope you cover what each team will do after they retire.
Was wondering about the "googles" in these sentences:
This would the inclusion of googles. (goggles?)
The googles were a difficulty
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Did they lose weight because of the wet suits? That certainly would be hard to wear in the peak of summer! I guess you are reaching the climax of the book. I hope you cover what each team will do after they retire.
Was wondering about the "googles" in these sentences:
This would the inclusion of googles. (goggles?)
The googles were a difficulty
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Helene for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Wonderful catch on goggles. Yes the weight loss was because of the wet suits. I figure at least four more chapters.
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And then maybe a book two and retired robbers changing the world for good?
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MMmm, good thought.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha matching swimming suites for the big haste:) this is funny :"
They all tried on the suits. A little time would be necessary to adjust them to it. The googles were a difficulty but they were all persistent. The ladies wore either a two piece or one piece under the suits, while the men would decide on their choice of swimsuits. They had to have two bathing suits, one of them were for washing and the other for wearing. Clothing change would be available. Thank goodness it was the peak of summer.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Ha, ha, ha matching swimming suites for the big haste:) this is funny :"
They all tried on the suits. A little time would be necessary to adjust them to it. The googles were a difficulty but they were all persistent. The ladies wore either a two piece or one piece under the suits, while the men would decide on their choice of swimsuits. They had to have two bathing suits, one of them were for washing and the other for wearing. Clothing change would be available. Thank goodness it was the peak of summer.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Iza for reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from royowen
It seems like the plans are faring well in their collective plans to "suss" out the arrangements as to what to wear in the heist. They are meticulous with their clothing, as they are with the planning, this is getting exciting, well done Alie, , blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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It seems like the plans are faring well in their collective plans to "suss" out the arrangements as to what to wear in the heist. They are meticulous with their clothing, as they are with the planning, this is getting exciting, well done Alie, , blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Roy for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
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Most welcome
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Smiling Big!!! Blessings.
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Well done
