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Exploited

The misuse of religion to exploit the weak and powerless

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Comment from Whitewave
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nomi338,
The misuse of religion to exploit the weak and powerless is ever present while ever there is church and religion. Under the guise of love, forgiveness and saving grace, the church gets away with heinous crimes, especially against the young and innocent. The church, with its fake religion, is a demon too dark to believe and most are unaware.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
    Exactly. What better place to hide in wait for easy and innocent prey than in the place that is supposed to be safe. Thank you for your review comments.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about those playing religion and all the corruption going on. You used very good descriptive words. Thank you for sharing! Teri

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thank you for a very fine review.
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent use of words that is relevant to today's world and throughout the ages. So much harm has been done in the name of religion and the innocent suffer. You have a smooth poetic flow of lines and words that adds to the strength of your theme.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thank you. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from lancellot
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Very interesting. This seems more about human nature than religion, though only one religion was mentioned. The one always mentioned when speaking of corruption. I wonder why that is?

Anyway, you are correct, Government, religion, politics... all become corrupt. Why? Because, with more people, and popularity comes more power. And we all know, Power corrupts, and absolute power corrupts absolutely.

The sin or corruption is within the human soul. As long as it involved humans, there is no way around it.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    I, only speak about Christianity because, it is the one faith I identify with as I am an avowed Christian. I care about Christianity and want it cleaned up. I do not care about other religions.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Last week my husband shared with me an article he read about the downfall of Christianity in our society. It was frightening. I can't remember the figures but basically the majority of people in the US do not identify as Christians. No wonder we're in a horrible mess. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    The worse part of that is that many who identify as Christian do not act or think like Christians, the just wear the title, they do not live the life.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I'm with you! Corruption has taken over about every element of this world we live in and false religion is used to ooze through the cracks to reach the what were thought to be the most protected areas. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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A very powerful and well-stated poem. There are those who call themselves Christian but who really worship power and money. There are those who call themselves Christian but often overlook the needs of the poor or who are so rigid in their beliefs they overlook the need for human understanding, compassion, and compromise.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thank you Mary. Your words have power.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Don't worry about being unable to find a solution. That is for others to do. It is not the work of artists like ourselves. But those whose job it is to find solutions could not even begin to think about he nature of their problems were they not point pointed out by the artists and poets in the first place.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Right you are. It is sometimes difficult to report on these abuses and not become overwhelmed by the futility of it all.
Comment from Heather Knight
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Speaking up and the arts are a very powerful tool and first step to changing the world.
Your poem is well-written, heart-felt and moving. You aren't afraid of controversial topics.
Thanks so much for writing and sharing this.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thank you. Where would we be if all voices remained stilled or quiet out of fear? Something that Satan the Devil desires.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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You have touched on some of the most sinful activities of man. I cannot understand how some people can commit these dreadful acts. The devil is alive and well.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Yes he is and therefore he must be resisted. It is not easy, I myself have struggled to resist.