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Quintilla poetic form ~ Monostitch FS Class25 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I enjoyed this poem for several reasons. Firstly, it is well-written. The rhyme scheme is on point. The alliteration in the first line is great! Secondly, the font size is large enough to be easily read. Lastly, The visual fits perfectly. If I had one suggestion, I would center the text under the dancer and make the text fiery red.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed this poem for several reasons. Firstly, it is well-written. The rhyme scheme is on point. The alliteration in the first line is great! Secondly, the font size is large enough to be easily read. Lastly, The visual fits perfectly. If I had one suggestion, I would center the text under the dancer and make the text fiery red.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you Sandra. I hope you are doing well. I'm glad you liked the Spanish theme, because to me, flamenco dancing is a great example of it. I have been watching dancers on YouTube and they are awesome and so exotic. It inspired me. :). Thanks again.
Melissa
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Melissa, with your monostich.
I like the rhymes, and your words perfectly describe
the dancer and the style of dance. This is quite different
from the style FS uses on its contests.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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You did a great job, Melissa, with your monostich.
I like the rhymes, and your words perfectly describe
the dancer and the style of dance. This is quite different
from the style FS uses on its contests.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you Jan. I hope you are doing well. I'm glad you liked the Spanish theme, because to me, flamenco dancing is a great example of it. I have been watching dancers on YouTube and they are awesome and so exotic. It inspired me. :). Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I am not good in writing poem with a specific structure, but you are doing such a wonderful job, your poem is perfect and vibrant. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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I am not good in writing poem with a specific structure, but you are doing such a wonderful job, your poem is perfect and vibrant. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you Iza. I hope you are doing well. I'm glad you liked the Spanish theme, because to me, flamenco dancing is a great example of it. I have been watching dancers on YouTube and they are awesome and so exotic. It inspired me. :). Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Paul McFarland
Great alliteration to start with. Verry effective rhymer scheme. The flamenco is unique to the Spanish and quite enjoyable to watch. Great picture.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Great alliteration to start with. Verry effective rhymer scheme. The flamenco is unique to the Spanish and quite enjoyable to watch. Great picture.
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you Paul. I hope you are doing well. I'm glad you liked the Spanish theme, because to me, flamenco dancing is a great example of it. I have been watching dancers on YouTube and they are awesome and so exotic. It inspired me. :). Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from royowen
A very interesting form Melissa, and a great way for taking this form and giving it that Spanish touch. The great art image suits the theme, and the poetry style is delicately scribed, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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A very interesting form Melissa, and a great way for taking this form and giving it that Spanish touch. The great art image suits the theme, and the poetry style is delicately scribed, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you dear Roy!!
Melissa
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Most welcome
