Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good poem. i like what the text stated. It would be enhanced if you made the font larger for easy reading, and if you added some color to the poem. The presentation would be enhanced with a colored background and a visual of some sort.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Sandra. You must be an artist.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 23-Jun-2022

You are welcome. I dabble~mainly self taught.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What an excellent post. You've done well, I love the tongue in cheek humour, it's most refreshing, and gives it that air of flippancy that is gratifying to read, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Roy. You can't go wrong with flower power.

reply by royowen on 23-Jun-2022

That's right

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a great little poem. The images of daisies in a sunburnt field and plucking petals to find our if you are loved are quite delightful. Best of luck in the love poem contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thanks, Carol. A surefire way to choose a lover.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

You managed to draw a clear picture of the game of love through the eyes of a daisy: "When summer comes, what is revealed
Are daisies in a sunburnt field.
Tis then I'll find what is my lot.
He loves me, or he loves me not.?" Love the rhyming:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thanks, Iza. With the luck that some people have, they would probably do as well by using this method.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem read well, Mystery Author. I like the end rhyme used
and the phrase he love me, he loves me not. I would like to see
this extended.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thanks, Jan. Maybe I will add to this a little later.

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022

I extended the poem as you requested.

Petal Power

I met a man the other day
Who almost took my breath away.
His ways are suave and debonair ?
An answer to my every prayer.

I wonder if he is the one,
Or will it just be hit and run?
I must be wary and decide
If I?m to be his blushing bride.

So now I know I must pursue
A method that is tried and true.
I?ll pick a daisy in my field,
And there my fate will be revealed.

Tis then I?ll find what is my lot:
He loves me or he loves me not.

Paul McFarland

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 25-Jun-2022

😊🐈‍⬛🙏