Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

What a lovely wee poem -- flawless rhyme and meter, and beautiful imagery that is evoked -- the sentiment is so romantic! Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022

Thanks for the review, Dawn. This poem didn't do well in the contest. I think it was too short.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

Love this. This an amazing write. Nice flow and rhyme.Tis then I'll find what is my lot. He loves me, or he loves me not.very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022

Thanks, Joanne. The contest didn't go very well. Maybe next time.

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 25-Jun-2022

You welcome

Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

Good old daisies. They will tell you the truth every time, or so we hope. I thought the flower was a dandelion, but daisies work just as well.

Fun little ditty.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022

Thanks Gary. Struck out in the contest. I'll use a different flower next time.

Comment from Whitewave

Excellent

This is a simple poem with an easy rhyme and rhythm, just like a happy little daisy waiting in the sunburnt field to reveal one of life's great mysteries - "He loves me or he loves me not." Hope the answer is positive for you.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022

Thanks for the review. No luck in the contest.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, The Love Flower, presented in iambic tetrameter, takes the road of simplicity to address this issue of loves fickleness.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Bill. Sometimes it takes more than one daisy.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It wasn't long, but it didn't have to be. It got its point across in a few lines. I like that the daisies will reveal "he loves me or he loves me not." Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Jessi. Daisies never lie.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Well done on this short poem for the contest. Brings back memories of childhood, when we would pick the daisies and pull off the petals one by one, just for fun.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Anne. Many a daisy has been sacrificed to tell the future.

reply by Anne Johnston on 23-Jun-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a clever and creative little poem that has a fantasy feel to it. I like the image of the daisies in the sunburnt field. This is also a fun poem to read out loud.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Elaine. I have pulled the petals more than once.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Daises were the perfect flower to say she does or not. No need for further details. You accepted the challenge and dotted your i's while crossing your t's nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Tom. Thank God for flower power.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is short but succinct for this prompt. I love the message in your economy of words. A winner here! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thanks, Sally. I haven't had much luck in the contests lately, but I'll keep trying.