The Love Flower
A Daisy Prediction25 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a lovely wee poem -- flawless rhyme and meter, and beautiful imagery that is evoked -- the sentiment is so romantic! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
What a lovely wee poem -- flawless rhyme and meter, and beautiful imagery that is evoked -- the sentiment is so romantic! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the review, Dawn. This poem didn't do well in the contest. I think it was too short.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Love this. This an amazing write. Nice flow and rhyme.Tis then I'll find what is my lot. He loves me, or he loves me not.very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
Love this. This an amazing write. Nice flow and rhyme.Tis then I'll find what is my lot. He loves me, or he loves me not.very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Joanne. The contest didn't go very well. Maybe next time.
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You welcome
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Good old daisies. They will tell you the truth every time, or so we hope. I thought the flower was a dandelion, but daisies work just as well.
Fun little ditty.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
Good old daisies. They will tell you the truth every time, or so we hope. I thought the flower was a dandelion, but daisies work just as well.
Fun little ditty.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks Gary. Struck out in the contest. I'll use a different flower next time.
Comment from Whitewave
This is a simple poem with an easy rhyme and rhythm, just like a happy little daisy waiting in the sunburnt field to reveal one of life's great mysteries - "He loves me or he loves me not." Hope the answer is positive for you.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
This is a simple poem with an easy rhyme and rhythm, just like a happy little daisy waiting in the sunburnt field to reveal one of life's great mysteries - "He loves me or he loves me not." Hope the answer is positive for you.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks for the review. No luck in the contest.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Love Flower, presented in iambic tetrameter, takes the road of simplicity to address this issue of loves fickleness.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
This poem, The Love Flower, presented in iambic tetrameter, takes the road of simplicity to address this issue of loves fickleness.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Bill. Sometimes it takes more than one daisy.
Comment from jessizero
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It wasn't long, but it didn't have to be. It got its point across in a few lines. I like that the daisies will reveal "he loves me or he loves me not." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It wasn't long, but it didn't have to be. It got its point across in a few lines. I like that the daisies will reveal "he loves me or he loves me not." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Jessi. Daisies never lie.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this short poem for the contest. Brings back memories of childhood, when we would pick the daisies and pull off the petals one by one, just for fun.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
Well done on this short poem for the contest. Brings back memories of childhood, when we would pick the daisies and pull off the petals one by one, just for fun.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Anne. Many a daisy has been sacrificed to tell the future.
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You are welcome.
Comment from mermaids
This is a clever and creative little poem that has a fantasy feel to it. I like the image of the daisies in the sunburnt field. This is also a fun poem to read out loud.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
This is a clever and creative little poem that has a fantasy feel to it. I like the image of the daisies in the sunburnt field. This is also a fun poem to read out loud.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Elaine. I have pulled the petals more than once.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Daises were the perfect flower to say she does or not. No need for further details. You accepted the challenge and dotted your i's while crossing your t's nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
Daises were the perfect flower to say she does or not. No need for further details. You accepted the challenge and dotted your i's while crossing your t's nice job.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Tom. Thank God for flower power.
Comment from Sally Law
This is short but succinct for this prompt. I love the message in your economy of words. A winner here! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
This is short but succinct for this prompt. I love the message in your economy of words. A winner here! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Sally. I haven't had much luck in the contests lately, but I'll keep trying.