Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

You certainly had me with the picture alone! Followed by just the right words makes for a delightful early morning read. I usually take a few minutes to sit on my back patio before 'taking on the day'. Good luck in the contest. ann

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

Thanks for reading and responding to my work. I admire you and your opinions!

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Your short poem is symbolic and thought provoking.
The graphics and brevity of your poem is its strength and charm.
The number of thoughts we can have is infinite.
Good luck,Elaine.
Excellent work.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

Thanks for reading and responding. I do appreciate it.

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 07-Jul-2022

You?re welcome.😊

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A few words to inspire us to let our imagination run free and let the words flow Elaine, but you said it all in just six words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

Thanks for your words and encouragement.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

I like your poem. It has a catchy title that is clearly explained in the text. The visual is also great. However, the text is a bit lost over in the corner. I would center it on the large visual and make the text larger. These two changes would make your text more prominent.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

I do appreciate your response. And I agree completely with your suggestions. I just can't figure out how to edit it. I need to experiment. Thanks.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

Very nice. You've caught the essence of this morning ritual with six words, and also presented it quite soothingly with your picture and color selection.

Well done.
Erika

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

I appreciate your time and response.

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this six-word poem for the contest. Fishing is the perfect metaphor-casting a net for fresh thoughts. I also like the accompanying picture. Good job.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

Thank you for reading and responding.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Love this poem :"

cast
your net
catch fresh thoughts", and there is a deeper meaning to your innocent lines:) sometimes water makes sprung out fresh ideas and angles. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

Thanks for reading and responding. elaine

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Excellent very little poem. You don't even need a fishing pole or net to catch thoughts. And a lake is very inspiring. I'm fortunate enough to be looking out at one as my husband takes the great grandkids out for a swim. Very well-chosen picture and lovely poem.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022

Thanks for reading and responding! elaine