Comment from JLR

Excellent

This is a well-crafted free-form poem. your quatrains flow well and connect the reader to the delightful graphic. The use of poetic devices is not forced and the overall message is soothing and reflects nature throughout. Good luck in the booth.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

Thank you for your read and encouraging review.

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I loved your conclusion to this, of how nature and our efforts to reflect and capture it drive energy into our lives. That's a beautiful way of looking at it. This is a strong entry - I wish you well in the contest.

Mike

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022

Thank you much for your read and encouraging review.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Good

This is a lovely poem with an attention-grabbing title. You have created many lovely images with the colors and flowers and birds and even the wind. I do think in the first line you mean "enchantments"; enchant is a verb. And the phrase "Rising strains unfolding" seems to be missing a word. Strains of what? Best of luck with this in the free-form nature poem contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thanks for your read and suggestions. Note changes:
Every season has its own charm

Nature's dulcet melodies unfolding

reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 23-Jun-2022

Good changes!