One Way or Another
Hair is fickle.15 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fifteen syllables to describe the radical range of bad hair days! In my case, mine would never get oily no matter how long I waited to wash it. My really bad hair day is when my naturally curly, course hair refuses to be controlled.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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You have made excellent use of your fifteen syllables to describe the radical range of bad hair days! In my case, mine would never get oily no matter how long I waited to wash it. My really bad hair day is when my naturally curly, course hair refuses to be controlled.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Unruly hair! You poor thing. A new poem is needed for you.
Thank you for the review and stars.
Comment from RodG
I had to chuckle after reading this shortie. I, who am bald, can only wish I had a bad hair day. I remember long-haired Hippies who complained about such days. Delightful! Rod
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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I had to chuckle after reading this shortie. I, who am bald, can only wish I had a bad hair day. I remember long-haired Hippies who complained about such days. Delightful! Rod
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Perhaps, for you, a balding poem should be suggested. I hate to have you feeling left out.
Thanks for the stars.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Cute poem and it meets the syllable requirements. I like that the text is large and easy to read. I like that it is centered on the large visual. The visual fits the text well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Cute poem and it meets the syllable requirements. I like that the text is large and easy to read. I like that it is centered on the large visual. The visual fits the text well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the review, stars, and visual comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Getting the right balance so that our hair shines is not easy these days as we battle with the atmospherics outside. You made me smile here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Getting the right balance so that our hair shines is not easy these days as we battle with the atmospherics outside. You made me smile here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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I am so glad I could make you smile! Thank you for the review and all the stars.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Those are often the problems on bad hair days, plus a half dozen others. Your picture is fun and your poem quite charming. Best wishes on your 5-5-5-5 contest entry.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Those are often the problems on bad hair days, plus a half dozen others. Your picture is fun and your poem quite charming. Best wishes on your 5-5-5-5 contest entry.
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your review and comments.
