How We Met
My usual sonnet type52 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
You write so beautifully. I have not read one piece of your work that I haven't appreciated or resonated with personally. I enjoy reading your work. Big fan! Best, JohnC
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You write so beautifully. I have not read one piece of your work that I haven't appreciated or resonated with personally. I enjoy reading your work. Big fan! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jake,
You've written another excellent sonnet in your own unique style.
I love the image of the "blossomed moon" and the story
of the maiden fair and young lad meeting and soon wedding.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Jake,
You've written another excellent sonnet in your own unique style.
I love the image of the "blossomed moon" and the story
of the maiden fair and young lad meeting and soon wedding.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sweet poem abut the first meeting of you and
your soon to be wife. I enjoyed reading it, and could
see everything mentioned. The words flow smoothly
with great imagery in the details.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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What a sweet poem abut the first meeting of you and
your soon to be wife. I enjoyed reading it, and could
see everything mentioned. The words flow smoothly
with great imagery in the details.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i loved this romantic poem about first love. It reminds me of some of my own but you do it so much better.
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i loved this romantic poem about first love. It reminds me of some of my own but you do it so much better.
Check out my love poems at my blog here https://wp.me/p7NAzO-25N and sign up joining my 7,000 followers.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent imagery in this fine poem, all begun midst a blossomed moon.
The story of meeting and wedding your wife sandwiched lovingly between two blossomed moons.
Thank you for sharing, Jay. :))
Gloria
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Excellent imagery in this fine poem, all begun midst a blossomed moon.
The story of meeting and wedding your wife sandwiched lovingly between two blossomed moons.
Thank you for sharing, Jay. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from lyenochka
I really like your phrase "the blossomed moon," Jaybird! It seems you knew from the very start that your beloved was the one for you. I'm sorry she went to heaven far too soon. Thanks for sharing!
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I really like your phrase "the blossomed moon," Jaybird! It seems you knew from the very start that your beloved was the one for you. I'm sorry she went to heaven far too soon. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautifully crafted poem in which your gentle love in meeting your lovely bride is in each word, each image.
I am spellbound by your words.
Best wishes
Mary
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A beautifully crafted poem in which your gentle love in meeting your lovely bride is in each word, each image.
I am spellbound by your words.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love your opening two lines - they could almost be a poem on their own. Lyrically gorgeous and packed with imagery. The rest of the poem's great too, but I'm smitten with that opening.
Mike
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I love your opening two lines - they could almost be a poem on their own. Lyrically gorgeous and packed with imagery. The rest of the poem's great too, but I'm smitten with that opening.
Mike
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from harmony13
Hi Jay, this is a beautiful love poem! The author's words are filled with loving thoughts, are descriptive and creative. I found this poem to describe the beauty of the author's relationship with the woman he chose for his wife. The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes!
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Hi Jay, this is a beautiful love poem! The author's words are filled with loving thoughts, are descriptive and creative. I found this poem to describe the beauty of the author's relationship with the woman he chose for his wife. The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nicely done sonnet about how you met your wife and how the relationship grew. It is a romantic story. I like the repetition in the beginning and end of the poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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This is a nicely done sonnet about how you met your wife and how the relationship grew. It is a romantic story. I like the repetition in the beginning and end of the poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
