How We Met
My usual sonnet type52 total reviews
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem and touches the heart at the same time. A lovely story, very simply told and I especially love the rhyming. Thanks for sharing.
With regards
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A lovely poem and touches the heart at the same time. A lovely story, very simply told and I especially love the rhyming. Thanks for sharing.
With regards
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from leather
I finally have some high-ranking stars and want to give you one for this enchanting poem. It was an easy read. The repeat of blossomed moon reference was a nice way to start and end the poem. It was a pleasure to read.
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I finally have some high-ranking stars and want to give you one for this enchanting poem. It was an easy read. The repeat of blossomed moon reference was a nice way to start and end the poem. It was a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from dellsworthpoet
I like this poem. It flows well. The shorter lines move the action along at a brisk pace. The images are clear. The rhyme scheme is maintained and the rhymes are unforced. I also like the short refrain of "blossomed moon". It forms a completed circle in the poem.
Thanks for a good read.
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I like this poem. It flows well. The shorter lines move the action along at a brisk pace. The images are clear. The rhyme scheme is maintained and the rhymes are unforced. I also like the short refrain of "blossomed moon". It forms a completed circle in the poem.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from evilynne
A very romantic poem. well written. It is easy to follow and very descriptive. It certainly describes a blossoming love between two people. Evi
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A very romantic poem. well written. It is easy to follow and very descriptive. It certainly describes a blossoming love between two people. Evi
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a beautiful, very romantic poem, Jay, and what a very romantic story. You had a wonderful wife, and your love blossomed from childhood, onwards. It must put a smile on your face everytime you mention her name, Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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What a beautiful, very romantic poem, Jay, and what a very romantic story. You had a wonderful wife, and your love blossomed from childhood, onwards. It must put a smile on your face everytime you mention her name, Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Jaybird,
This is a sweet, unforgettable poem about the day you met your beautiful soulmate.
Your rhyme is nice. I like the phrase 'blossomed moon.'
Great job.
Nice "Best" ranking.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Jaybird,
This is a sweet, unforgettable poem about the day you met your beautiful soulmate.
Your rhyme is nice. I like the phrase 'blossomed moon.'
Great job.
Nice "Best" ranking.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you gave us the perfect recipe and definition of tender and pure love that comes from the soul: "Love in the fragrant air of June-
'Twas captured by a blossomed moon." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings,
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I think you gave us the perfect recipe and definition of tender and pure love that comes from the soul: "Love in the fragrant air of June-
'Twas captured by a blossomed moon." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings,
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It is good, how you met and love grew and you engaged in a short period of time, love at first sight, your description of the days is good tuned, voiced and melodious with romantic embossing; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide; can't reply; SICK; FREE MEMBER; Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
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It is good, how you met and love grew and you engaged in a short period of time, love at first sight, your description of the days is good tuned, voiced and melodious with romantic embossing; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide; can't reply; SICK; FREE MEMBER; Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Ulla
Oh, that is so wonderful. Your poem is just so full of the profound love you felt for your late wife. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Ulla:)))
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Oh, that is so wonderful. Your poem is just so full of the profound love you felt for your late wife. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is so sweet, first falling in love, then forming a relationship, and then unconditional love. It's beautiful. Thank you for sharing this romantic poem with us. I'm a sucker for romance and this poem was perfect. I really enjoyed reading.
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This is so sweet, first falling in love, then forming a relationship, and then unconditional love. It's beautiful. Thank you for sharing this romantic poem with us. I'm a sucker for romance and this poem was perfect. I really enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
