How We Met
My usual sonnet type52 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on having this poem recognized and all time best. The poem was beautiful and romantic. I am glad that things worked out for you. Thanks for sharing.
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Congratulations on having this poem recognized and all time best. The poem was beautiful and romantic. I am glad that things worked out for you. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mr. Jaybird1 a good day to you sir. As always it's a treat to read your work and I hope this finds you well. Thank you for yet another wonderful poem. Keep sharing and keep inspiring us.
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Hello Mr. Jaybird1 a good day to you sir. As always it's a treat to read your work and I hope this finds you well. Thank you for yet another wonderful poem. Keep sharing and keep inspiring us.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very well written and employs all the necessary attributes of a great sonnet-styled poem. I am impressed and a little bit jealous of your wonderfully romantic meeting under the blossoming moon. I am happy for you really and do not hold it against you that you have found the one!
Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!
Jesse
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This is very well written and employs all the necessary attributes of a great sonnet-styled poem. I am impressed and a little bit jealous of your wonderfully romantic meeting under the blossoming moon. I am happy for you really and do not hold it against you that you have found the one!
Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
Comment from bob cullen
A beautifully worded expression of love. And as always, they come across to this reader as rich in sincerity. It's both a delight and a pleasure to read your poetry.
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A beautifully worded expression of love. And as always, they come across to this reader as rich in sincerity. It's both a delight and a pleasure to read your poetry.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the love story. You did it well to rhyme. It makes it easy and pleasant for people to read.
The story is simple. People meet, fall in love, get married etc. All well is written this poem.
It reminds my wedding date in June. June bride is always beautiful.
Thank you for sharing such a love story.
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I like the love story. You did it well to rhyme. It makes it easy and pleasant for people to read.
The story is simple. People meet, fall in love, get married etc. All well is written this poem.
It reminds my wedding date in June. June bride is always beautiful.
Thank you for sharing such a love story.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from BethShelby
This is beautiful love poem. I met the love of my life in June also and two years later married him in June. He died four year ago but today would have been our 65th anniversary if he had lived. I had forgotten today was the 23rd until I read your poem.
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This is beautiful love poem. I met the love of my life in June also and two years later married him in June. He died four year ago but today would have been our 65th anniversary if he had lived. I had forgotten today was the 23rd until I read your poem.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I love this absolutely beautifully written sonnet.
One starlit night, it was in June,we first met 'midst a blossomed moon.While gentle breezes stirred her hair,
I fell hard for this maiden fair.very romantic and shows how deeply you loved your wife.
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I love this absolutely beautifully written sonnet.
One starlit night, it was in June,we first met 'midst a blossomed moon.While gentle breezes stirred her hair,
I fell hard for this maiden fair.very romantic and shows how deeply you loved your wife.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You wrote a lovely sonnet about meeting your wife, jaybird.
-She would be very pleased.
-You have many good, romantic images like
"a blossomed moon" and "gentle breezes."
-You tell a good story about meeting her and
how the romance grew.
-A very good closing couplet with the
effective repetition of "a blossomed moon."
-Very well done. Have a good day!!
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-You wrote a lovely sonnet about meeting your wife, jaybird.
-She would be very pleased.
-You have many good, romantic images like
"a blossomed moon" and "gentle breezes."
-You tell a good story about meeting her and
how the romance grew.
-A very good closing couplet with the
effective repetition of "a blossomed moon."
-Very well done. Have a good day!!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love your poem describing how you met the love of your life. June is certainly the month for romance and I am happy that you have these great memories to comfort you.
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I love your poem describing how you met the love of your life. June is certainly the month for romance and I am happy that you have these great memories to comfort you.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
Comment from mermaids
This is a poem that makes the reader feel good. A strong feeling of love and romance comes through your words clearly. June is a month for love as seen in your words. You have created a poem that warms the heart.
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This is a poem that makes the reader feel good. A strong feeling of love and romance comes through your words clearly. June is a month for love as seen in your words. You have created a poem that warms the heart.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
