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Dear God

Searching for healing

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Comment from Fleedleflump
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You got me thinking as I was reading your well-expressed piece, about perceptions and how they shape us and our views. I say that because I heard someone on the radio recently declare that 'everybody knows there's a fertility crisis' - an odd statement, given the world's population is exploding beyond all control. But the point is, this person believed it, and it was causing them anguish. In this case, you got me looking up suicide rates, and I noticed that, since 2000, they have increased by about 28% in the USA, but dropped significantly globally. Here in the UK, they've stayed about the same.

I love that your solution is for people to get involved - ultimately, that's the only way we can make anything happen.

Many thanks for making me thing with your excellent piece.

Mike

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
    Thanks Mike for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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There are some nice phrases in this letter. "I'm concerned about the walls I placed around my heart." " To hold that sweet little boy and laugh with my best friend again was the most healing sensation of my life." "
How can we heal what has been broken? Where do we begin to make lasting change? I want to get involved, be part of the solution, part of the change, but I'm not sure where to start beyond healing my own heart. Please help us. I fear we cannot overcome this on our own."

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Thank you
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and very heartfelt letter to God you have penned for the contest. I enjoyed reading each line. I thought it was great that you wanted to help be a part of the solution to some of the things happening near you. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Thanks Teri