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"Poetry from the Broken Heart"

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Within the Valley of Death."
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Comment from kahpot
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Your love of Jason and his love of helping others is very well written in this heartfelt read, organ donation is a very unselfish commitment, your choice of bible verse is wonderful, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Trying my best for him and thanks!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
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I'm not sure how to comment on this work. It is clearly heartfelt and filled with remorse...but as the biblical reflections indicate, there is also a sad-joy...resurrection, going home.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    I love Bible quotes.
    And, I decided to tie them in for the very first time.
    Yes, with basic thoughts about organ tissue donation and my late son Jason.
    Thanks for your review and have a nice blessed week!
    Doctor Ricky 1024