Scattered Thoughts
Thoughts to myself21 total reviews
Comment from leather
This does read like scattered thoughts, but with a cohesive thread holding it together. That thread is one of the weaknesses and tribulations that permeate life today. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This does read like scattered thoughts, but with a cohesive thread holding it together. That thread is one of the weaknesses and tribulations that permeate life today. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Charity,
I think that you have some good points in this poem. There is a lot of violence and disease happening now the we all have to change out thoughts for the bettement of all. Some of us need to be more accepting and we all need to get rid of the bad thingsin our minds and lives. I think the 'tow' it should be throw it'. What is a blunt?
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Hi Charity,
I think that you have some good points in this poem. There is a lot of violence and disease happening now the we all have to change out thoughts for the bettement of all. Some of us need to be more accepting and we all need to get rid of the bad thingsin our minds and lives. I think the 'tow' it should be throw it'. What is a blunt?
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Blunt is like a joint. To smoke weed. Thank you for your review.
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Blunt is like a joint. To smoke weed. Thank you for your review.
Comment from karenina
Hey Charity, one of your biggest fans here--
Bless you, woman, for being unafraid to pull back all the stage prop silver linings and reveal the dark clouds just out of sight for most...
It doesn't mean they're not there; it just means most of us, sadly-- keep our eyes down while a huge swath of our population gets pulled out in the undertow...
As a nurse, you know the truth. Bacteria, and infection, just thrive in a dark moist environment... How smart of you, how healing it can be, to rip off the pseudo-bandage and expose our wounds to light!
I say it every time because I mean it. You write it real. You bleed from your soul...and that's why I'm always encouraging you to keep it up, to keep slamming, and not lose your edge.
Sharp edges slash through the paralysis of inaction. I can't imagine anyone reading your work and not FEELING!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Hey Charity, one of your biggest fans here--
Bless you, woman, for being unafraid to pull back all the stage prop silver linings and reveal the dark clouds just out of sight for most...
It doesn't mean they're not there; it just means most of us, sadly-- keep our eyes down while a huge swath of our population gets pulled out in the undertow...
As a nurse, you know the truth. Bacteria, and infection, just thrive in a dark moist environment... How smart of you, how healing it can be, to rip off the pseudo-bandage and expose our wounds to light!
I say it every time because I mean it. You write it real. You bleed from your soul...and that's why I'm always encouraging you to keep it up, to keep slamming, and not lose your edge.
Sharp edges slash through the paralysis of inaction. I can't imagine anyone reading your work and not FEELING!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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You are the best 👌. Always giving and showing the love and support.
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You are the best 👌. Always giving and showing the love and support.
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Love your raw honesty!
Comment from Janet Foor
"Scattered Thoughts" is a thought provoking piece. You cut right to the heart and there is a profound depth to your message. Your are right on point. If you change your
thoughts, you can change your world.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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"Scattered Thoughts" is a thought provoking piece. You cut right to the heart and there is a profound depth to your message. Your are right on point. If you change your
thoughts, you can change your world.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very powerful poem. Have you looked into bogging yet? I was supposed to send you something but got busy. Word press is pretty easy to use they have online tutorials to get you started. You can do the free version first then later upgrade. Google blog is also easy to use. In any event, it is easy to get started. I used the maxwell theme for my blog which you can find at Https://thewordaccordingtocosmos.com Oh and you find a list of places to submit on my blog as well (not yet posted) coming soon.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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very powerful poem. Have you looked into bogging yet? I was supposed to send you something but got busy. Word press is pretty easy to use they have online tutorials to get you started. You can do the free version first then later upgrade. Google blog is also easy to use. In any event, it is easy to get started. I used the maxwell theme for my blog which you can find at Https://thewordaccordingtocosmos.com Oh and you find a list of places to submit on my blog as well (not yet posted) coming soon.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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I haven't started the blog yet but doing a lot of poetry slams and going to start a channel on YouTube. Thanks for your review.
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I haven't started the blog yet but doing a lot of poetry slams and going to start a channel on YouTube. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Teri7
Charity, This is a very well written and very interesting poem you have penned. Life these days can be very hard. Our only Hope is Jesus Christ. There is so much hate and bitterness in this world. Those innocent children being killed for not reason. Man being killed just for being here by hateful people. It can be scary but we have a strong and mighty tower in our Lord Jesus Christ. Thank you for sharing your thoughts as always! love, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Charity, This is a very well written and very interesting poem you have penned. Life these days can be very hard. Our only Hope is Jesus Christ. There is so much hate and bitterness in this world. Those innocent children being killed for not reason. Man being killed just for being here by hateful people. It can be scary but we have a strong and mighty tower in our Lord Jesus Christ. Thank you for sharing your thoughts as always! love, Teri
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your words of wisdom.
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Thanks for your words of wisdom.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being trapped inside negative thoughts can indeed make us suffer and prolong the agony instead of the ecstasy in life. This is why people have therapy to overcome the obstacles life throws in our path. A poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Being trapped inside negative thoughts can indeed make us suffer and prolong the agony instead of the ecstasy in life. This is why people have therapy to overcome the obstacles life throws in our path. A poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem.
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Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Are you really a nurse, Charity? This poem would do well in a slam. Have you ever participated in one? Very interesting picture. Hope you are still doing okay.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Are you really a nurse, Charity? This poem would do well in a slam. Have you ever participated in one? Very interesting picture. Hope you are still doing okay.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Yes I'm a shot clinc nurse. Yes I'm doing slams regularly now. Some will be posted on my channel on YouTube.
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Yes I'm a shot clinc nurse. Yes I'm doing slams regularly now. Some will be posted on my channel on YouTube.
Comment from Wendy G
Very thought provoking as yours always are. But perhaps not as dark in tone and mood. Perhaps working as a nurse will be helpful in getting on top of your own pain. "Blessed to have a second chance". Wishing you a brand new start and a chance to find happiness.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Very thought provoking as yours always are. But perhaps not as dark in tone and mood. Perhaps working as a nurse will be helpful in getting on top of your own pain. "Blessed to have a second chance". Wishing you a brand new start and a chance to find happiness.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Scattered Thoughts, reads like a hip hop verse. Sounds like what the title indicates: Random ideas.
Found this:
All good things in life (don't) last.
Most of (our) role models are locked up diseased.
Happy day.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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This poem, Scattered Thoughts, reads like a hip hop verse. Sounds like what the title indicates: Random ideas.
Found this:
All good things in life (don't) last.
Most of (our) role models are locked up diseased.
Happy day.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your feedback.
