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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your poem- good presentation- good that you included notes explaining night fishing with nets for catfish- full net before the time bars close at 2pm would be cause for celebration- Good job-

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

    Gypsy♡
    "The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls."--Picasso
Comment from aryr
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What a delightful picture, Gypsy, simply because it shows the skills of night fishing. Your words showed the smartness of fishing at night. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
    Blessed be♡

    "The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls."--Picasso
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Colorful presentation of the fisherman's day penned in your Haiku poem. I doubt the catfish is celebrating at the end of its day LOL. Do like to eat fish, but not catfish!

Mark

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy ♡
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
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It's always good to have a good catch as evident in the full net. Thanks for explaining the "final call." So if the "catfish" is calling for the final drink, does that mean the other slang meaning of "catfish"? Or is it over for the catfish?

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    It's over for the last catfish... pobrecito. LoL

    It's a play on words. Last fish/last drink that could be on his boat. Maybe it's not rational, I visualize scenes in my mind and follow my muse. :)

    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy ♡
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus
reply by lyenochka on 20-Jun-2022
    Oh, and the slang "catfishing" is young men trying to catch rich older women online.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Yeah, catfishing online is for women and men the same. Some women pretend to be men and vice versa:) it's a terrible way to start a relationship lol
Comment from LisaMay
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It is certainly a time for celebration at the bar, coming home with full nets. You might want to fix your heading - I was expecting a poem about baby birds.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Sorry, I did fix it, thank you for letting me know.

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

    Gypsy
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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Thanks for a nice poem and a beautiful presentation. The poem flows well. The words are simple, but elegant. Both fit for a picture of simple life and content.

Thanks for a good read. Peace.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

    Gypsy
reply by dellsworthpoet on 20-Jun-2022
    You are welcome.