You can keep the memories
Looking back one last time4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sad to read save for the part where you left whomever it was that caused your distress, and I hope your writing releases strife, and it attests you REALLY are through with whoevere they WERE.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Sad to read save for the part where you left whomever it was that caused your distress, and I hope your writing releases strife, and it attests you REALLY are through with whoevere they WERE.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review and comments! And yes, my divorce was finalized in August 2022!!
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Better days ahead. :-)
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hello, this poem was very relatable for me, regarding my younger days of being stuck in a relationship with an awful person. And it's incredible how the feelings can resurface again and again, even after much time has passed.
I hope writing about it gives you a sense of peace. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Feel free to come visit my portfolio if you have time. I enjoy finding new readers.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Hello, this poem was very relatable for me, regarding my younger days of being stuck in a relationship with an awful person. And it's incredible how the feelings can resurface again and again, even after much time has passed.
I hope writing about it gives you a sense of peace. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Feel free to come visit my portfolio if you have time. I enjoy finding new readers.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Hi Erica,
Thank you so much for the excellent review! Yes, writing has been my outlet for my emotions, a way of putting things in perspective and healing. And it does give me a sense of peace. I will visit your portfolio! And again, thank you for your review and comments!!
Comment from Bridge
A very well written poem. Many of us will be able to relate to the thoughts expressed in the poem. Thanks for sharing................
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With regards
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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A very well written poem. Many of us will be able to relate to the thoughts expressed in the poem. Thanks for sharing................
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With regards
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the review, I appreciate the excellent score!
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
This is a bitter poem. The writer creates images of an extremely painful romance--one in which one person was 'all give,' and the other 'all take.' It will likely evoke a strong emotional response (anger, remorse) from many readers. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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This is a bitter poem. The writer creates images of an extremely painful romance--one in which one person was 'all give,' and the other 'all take.' It will likely evoke a strong emotional response (anger, remorse) from many readers. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the review and comments. Yours is a keen obseration! I lived it and writing has proved to be the best therapy for me. Thank you again!
