One Thousand Cranes
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18 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are colorful, nature based, descriptive and creative.
I pondered on the first two lines and thought about the beauty of autumn.
And for me the last line says it all! The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is lovely and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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The author's words are colorful, nature based, descriptive and creative.
I pondered on the first two lines and thought about the beauty of autumn.
And for me the last line says it all! The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is lovely and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation- I especially like - autumns crisp breeze waltzes with fallen leaves-very nice when spoken- I wanted add another seven words to keep it going lol- I did recognize the disco ball from the OLD days thank you- I was still doing the waltz- not at all a dico lover - good job
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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I like your poem- good presentation- I especially like - autumns crisp breeze waltzes with fallen leaves-very nice when spoken- I wanted add another seven words to keep it going lol- I did recognize the disco ball from the OLD days thank you- I was still doing the waltz- not at all a dico lover - good job
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much ap. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy♡
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your haiku is in super form, Gypsy.
This is one of the best you have written.
The image is perfectly described, however
your descriptive words painted their own,
too. The color scheme is awesome.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Your haiku is in super form, Gypsy.
This is one of the best you have written.
The image is perfectly described, however
your descriptive words painted their own,
too. The color scheme is awesome.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Beautifully written and packaged per usual. I enjoy your haiku's. Your presentation is always so appealing. Please tell me how you inserted that last bunch of leaves. Well-written, well-presented so well-done.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Beautifully written and packaged per usual. I enjoy your haiku's. Your presentation is always so appealing. Please tell me how you inserted that last bunch of leaves. Well-written, well-presented so well-done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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To insert bottom pictures: search pictures with black background, use a program called IMAGESHACK, upload picture to tha advance edit fanstory icon of a picture located on the toolbar. Use black background in fanstory background color.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
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You are welcome and thank you for the directions. I am not computer savvy, but I will try.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Both the image and your words give a perfect and magical image of leaves dancing in the autumn breeze.
In this haiku, you truly lift the spirits of the day.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Both the image and your words give a perfect and magical image of leaves dancing in the autumn breeze.
In this haiku, you truly lift the spirits of the day.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
This is a gem of a poem. Yes, the disco ball is something I know! Your autumn Haiku is a nice combo of artwork and verse - good job!
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Gypsy,
This is a gem of a poem. Yes, the disco ball is something I know! Your autumn Haiku is a nice combo of artwork and verse - good job!
Mark
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
Comment from Frances Jean
Sensational! A wonderful Haiku supported by an awesome Autumnal picture. What a glorious 'sunset disco ball'! You have painted the scene in just a few words superbly. Well done and good luck in the competition. Franky
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Sensational! A wonderful Haiku supported by an awesome Autumnal picture. What a glorious 'sunset disco ball'! You have painted the scene in just a few words superbly. Well done and good luck in the competition. Franky
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
Comment from karenina
Funny. It never occurred to me the younger generation would have no clue what a disco ball is/was!
(Which speaks to MY antiquity!)
Autumn is my favorite time of year!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Funny. It never occurred to me the younger generation would have no clue what a disco ball is/was!
(Which speaks to MY antiquity!)
Autumn is my favorite time of year!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, karenina. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
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You as well!
Comment from kahpot
Yes swirling leaves do look like the waltz in motion, I remember those disco balls as we danced beneath them an excellent read, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Yes swirling leaves do look like the waltz in motion, I remember those disco balls as we danced beneath them an excellent read, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis
Comment from Sugarray77
I like this one Gypsy. The comparison of the sun to a disco ball is unique and apt. Great job on this fine verse and the use of your imagination to relate it to something fun. Maybe we should go dancing under that sun :). Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I like this one Gypsy. The comparison of the sun to a disco ball is unique and apt. Great job on this fine verse and the use of your imagination to relate it to something fun. Maybe we should go dancing under that sun :). Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Melissa, have a wonderful weekend. ♡
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -Novalis