My plea to God
Personal essay17 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I loved your prayer, Santha. I am glad you pray as you cook and ride the bus. It shows that you have a natural relationship with the Lord. I loved your questions as you speak for all of us. You met this contest challenge well and hope your post does well in it!!
One repeated word here:
My aunt aunt died of cancer (remove one 'aunt')
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I loved your prayer, Santha. I am glad you pray as you cook and ride the bus. It shows that you have a natural relationship with the Lord. I loved your questions as you speak for all of us. You met this contest challenge well and hope your post does well in it!!
One repeated word here:
My aunt aunt died of cancer (remove one 'aunt')
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen for this lovely words. I have too much on my platter now and hence the delay in replying. I am giving online tuitions to two boys who want to go to Canada..Just for a month.
So I am slow in my reviews too,
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How kind of you to help those boys! I hope they have a productive time in Canada that would help their future careers. Please don't worry about delays or activity here as completely understand how busy you are! 💖
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think those are valid requests to ask our Father. The evil ones fly through life without a single upset. It seems that the expression: The devil looks after his own... is true! Let us all pray God will read your letter and can help us in this way. Well done, this is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you the very best of luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I think those are valid requests to ask our Father. The evil ones fly through life without a single upset. It seems that the expression: The devil looks after his own... is true! Let us all pray God will read your letter and can help us in this way. Well done, this is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you the very best of luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for the empathy and understanding.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I have wondered the same thing. I know God works in mysterious ways, but I don't understand. Good luck with the contest.
My aunt aunt died of cancer, her last days spent in considerable pain. (my aunt's aunt????? & you can put a period after cancer and a capital 'h' on 'her')
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I have wondered the same thing. I know God works in mysterious ways, but I don't understand. Good luck with the contest.
My aunt aunt died of cancer, her last days spent in considerable pain. (my aunt's aunt????? & you can put a period after cancer and a capital 'h' on 'her')
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Sorry for that ..Thanks for pointing it out. Thanks for dropping by
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like your plea at the end:"On behalf of all your children, I beseech you to weave your magic and do away that "sans teeth,sans eyes, sans taste, sans everything" stage and allow us to say goodbye with dignity." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I like your plea at the end:"On behalf of all your children, I beseech you to weave your magic and do away that "sans teeth,sans eyes, sans taste, sans everything" stage and allow us to say goodbye with dignity." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for the understanding .
Comment from Bridge
I loved your letter to God. I completely agree with the message in the letter. I'm very sorry Maths teacher and aunt. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I loved your letter to God. I completely agree with the message in the letter. I'm very sorry Maths teacher and aunt. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks for dropping by and I am sorry for the delayed reply .Just have a bit too much on my platter now..So I ammbehind my reviews too
Comment from Pantygynt
Read the Old testament. It's full of murder mayhem and war. 'The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold', and Joshua's musical artillery was as effective as any howitzer or cruise missile. It is good to know the Ukrainians have Marines in case He decides on a repeat of the Red Sea misunderstanding that did for all those Egyptians.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Read the Old testament. It's full of murder mayhem and war. 'The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold', and Joshua's musical artillery was as effective as any howitzer or cruise missile. It is good to know the Ukrainians have Marines in case He decides on a repeat of the Red Sea misunderstanding that did for all those Egyptians.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I get your point. Thanks for dropping in .
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is earnestly told and very well expressed. I thought your point about different religions was particularly well observed. As for your core point - I'm with you. Losing my mind frightens me more than any physical ailment.
Nicely done.
Mike
Spag notes:
'I have too many questions and too many doubts that I don't know where to start.' - I feel as though the second 'too' should be 'so'
'God-fearing life denied of a decent exit?' - 'of' can be removed.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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This is earnestly told and very well expressed. I thought your point about different religions was particularly well observed. As for your core point - I'm with you. Losing my mind frightens me more than any physical ailment.
Nicely done.
Mike
Spag notes:
'I have too many questions and too many doubts that I don't know where to start.' - I feel as though the second 'too' should be 'so'
'God-fearing life denied of a decent exit?' - 'of' can be removed.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. for the suggestions.
