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Lost

But then

4 total reviews 
Comment from Charlie Shine
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level


I really like this.
I think it is written with such simplicity yet it is so effective.
It flows really well.
Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Lost, presented in two quatrains, takes the situation from searching for something to searching and finding oneself. That is the true find.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Comment from Fleedleflump
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There was some fun playing with words here - I like to think of lost things more as alternatively-located either in space, time or thought. Sometimes, when we find ourselves, everything else falls into place.

Mike

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022


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Comment from Michael Cassar
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Excellent and clear. Often enough such events occur in our life. It expresses the interplay between our sight and the mind. Staring at what could not be found is also relevant to seniors who often scramble to find the right word.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
    Thank you