Lost
But then4 total reviews
Comment from Charlie Shine
I really like this.
I think it is written with such simplicity yet it is so effective.
It flows really well.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
I really like this.
I think it is written with such simplicity yet it is so effective.
It flows really well.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Lost, presented in two quatrains, takes the situation from searching for something to searching and finding oneself. That is the true find.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
This poem, Lost, presented in two quatrains, takes the situation from searching for something to searching and finding oneself. That is the true find.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Fleedleflump
There was some fun playing with words here - I like to think of lost things more as alternatively-located either in space, time or thought. Sometimes, when we find ourselves, everything else falls into place.
Mike
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
There was some fun playing with words here - I like to think of lost things more as alternatively-located either in space, time or thought. Sometimes, when we find ourselves, everything else falls into place.
Mike
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Michael Cassar
Excellent and clear. Often enough such events occur in our life. It expresses the interplay between our sight and the mind. Staring at what could not be found is also relevant to seniors who often scramble to find the right word.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
Excellent and clear. Often enough such events occur in our life. It expresses the interplay between our sight and the mind. Staring at what could not be found is also relevant to seniors who often scramble to find the right word.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thank you