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Little ones ...

Letter to God

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Comment from Aussie
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Well done my friend. I used that 'love is patient etc. when I took the lecturn at my father's funeral. If we can but reach one person for the Lord, we are blessed. I liked your selfless request of god and like me, you asked for others. Good luck in the contest my NSW buddy. Love, Kay xx Sunni xx.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thanks so much Kay. Praying for others and children will be in His will, I am sure. And your prayer will be answered, offering yourself to serve in ways that will be a blessing to others.
    I appreciate your review, and send hugs to both you and Benny (how dos he look after his grooming?)
    Wendy
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Letter to God
Little ones ...

Wendy G
You certainty know how to pray, for the children now and years to come.
Why don't we all pray for God's children.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thank you dear Gert. I would not like to be young today. The world must be very confusing and daunting.
    Wendy
reply by Gert sherwood on 17-Jun-2022
    Wendy,
    I'm so glad that I'm old and don't have to worry about my elderly children.
    Gert
Comment from lyenochka
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What a beautiful prayer, Wendy! And I prayed with your for this next generation as they are plagued with more problems than we ever imagined when we were growing up. Thank you for your heart that loves children and I know you prayed according to His will because He loves these children more than we are able. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thank you Helen. The world today must be confusing and daunting for children. Praying He will bring many to Himself and will help them to stand firm and strong in Him.
    Wendy
Comment from mermaids
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I like how you are discussing children with God, so important in our world of violence. Your words have meaning and give the reader much to think about. Children are so important as your letter emphasizes. Excellent letter to God.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for reviewing. Much appreciated. Theirs will be a big responsibility and a difficult task to look after our world in the future.
    Wendy
Comment from royowen
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What a lovely post Wendy, this is truly beautiful, we need to pray for the children of the world. Our church does a great job with the children, allowing them to have a big chunk of the service from time to time, allowing them to pray for the adults, my granddaughter was reportedly weeping as she was praying, I know she wept at her baptism, after asking me to allow her to be so, I jumped joyfully at that, dear, sweet children of the world, I add my support to Wendy's prayer
Father. Well done, Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thanks Roy. Great that your church looks after its children well. Which one do you go to?
    Wendy
reply by royowen on 16-Jun-2022
    It?s called just Gateway church, Salisbury east non denominational thank you Wendy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a fine letter to God. You request a lot, but then God is a generous god, and when it is deserving he will grant a lot. I am certain he will read your letter attentively and answer it favourably. Kate xx

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for your astute and insightful review.
    Wendy
Comment from LisaMay
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You cover many good points about how children are so often lacking in knowledge of Our Father, due to their contemporary lifestyle: lacking love, inability to discern truth, living in fear, exposed to loss...
Paul's words in a letter to the Corinthians are so beautiful and encompassing - definitely worth committing to memory (and practice). If only it came naturally to us all to connect with God's super-natural love.

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thanks very much for reviewing. Yes, I would not like to be young today. The world must seem very confusing and daunting, and directionless.
    Wendy
reply by LisaMay on 16-Jun-2022
    Some think the direction is down the gurgler.