Don't Ask Me What I'm Doing
From my friend's little boy8 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
In the absence of any indication of the young boy's age, the mind boggles as to what mischief he could be up to. Pondering the possibilities is likely to keep me occupied all day. Thanks for the distraction from chores!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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In the absence of any indication of the young boy's age, the mind boggles as to what mischief he could be up to. Pondering the possibilities is likely to keep me occupied all day. Thanks for the distraction from chores!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from jaded831
You made me laugh, which was the point. You followed the rules. It amazes me how much children inspire us. Not even knowing it they make us laugh and smile. Great entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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You made me laugh, which was the point. You followed the rules. It amazes me how much children inspire us. Not even knowing it they make us laugh and smile. Great entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank youI
Comment from Faith Williams
Of all the entries for this contest, yours is the one that actually made me laugh! Smiles for the other ones, but laughter for yours. Having kids of my own, I relate so much to this.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Of all the entries for this contest, yours is the one that actually made me laugh! Smiles for the other ones, but laughter for yours. Having kids of my own, I relate so much to this.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I admit I laughed when my friend told me this story, too. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was cute. The child was honest. Even doing wrong. Sneaking food was a no, no. We had our three meals each day. And we had not snacking in between meals. We were given a snack when our parents or grandparents decided to give us one. Today, kids do not know how lucky they are.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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This was cute. The child was honest. Even doing wrong. Sneaking food was a no, no. We had our three meals each day. And we had not snacking in between meals. We were given a snack when our parents or grandparents decided to give us one. Today, kids do not know how lucky they are.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Thanks for the note, too.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good description and effective use of dialogue.
-I like the question and the answer.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Thanks for the note, too.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good description and effective use of dialogue.
-I like the question and the answer.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the fun contest.
Perfect give away that something is wrong.
Though eating cookies is something most kids do.
Adults eat the apple and the cookie.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the fun contest.
Perfect give away that something is wrong.
Though eating cookies is something most kids do.
Adults eat the apple and the cookie.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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I appreciate your comments, Robert
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A very cute poem, and the syllable count is on point. The visual is great for the poem. However, the text is too small. I feel you should enlarge the text, make it a vibrant color from the visual, and center it under the visual.
Typically, kids' writings are large and colorful. The suggestions I made would enhance your poem and make it really look like a piece of writing kids would be attracted to. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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A very cute poem, and the syllable count is on point. The visual is great for the poem. However, the text is too small. I feel you should enlarge the text, make it a vibrant color from the visual, and center it under the visual.
Typically, kids' writings are large and colorful. The suggestions I made would enhance your poem and make it really look like a piece of writing kids would be attracted to. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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I've been trying to enlarge the text, but it enlarges everything! I highlight everything and then I press control plus. I'll keep trying. Thanks!
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Press it only once. The longer you keep your finger on it, the large things become. It's easy once you get the knack of doing it.
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I think I got it! Thanks.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned in the Just for Fun 5-7-5 contest. You used great imagery and very good words. I can see that little boy now as he says those words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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This is a very cute and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned in the Just for Fun 5-7-5 contest. You used great imagery and very good words. I can see that little boy now as he says those words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Teri, very much!
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you are so welcome!
