Father
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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem, and it meets the syllable count. I love your presentation. I like that the poem is centered on the large visual. I like that the font is large and in a color that matches the man's clothing. It's a good visual but the man appears sad. If he is a beloved dad, there should be some joy in his appearance. However, whether it is or not the overall presentation is well-done.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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This is a good poem, and it meets the syllable count. I love your presentation. I like that the poem is centered on the large visual. I like that the font is large and in a color that matches the man's clothing. It's a good visual but the man appears sad. If he is a beloved dad, there should be some joy in his appearance. However, whether it is or not the overall presentation is well-done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Sandra
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Wow this poem it Sounds just like a Hallmark greeting card. A very Nice background color and choice of illustration. I love my dad. I can relate to this
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Wow this poem it Sounds just like a Hallmark greeting card. A very Nice background color and choice of illustration. I love my dad. I can relate to this
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thanks, CG
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very festive poem and indeed a father is a dad when he gold for the first time the baby in his arm. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Very festive poem and indeed a father is a dad when he gold for the first time the baby in his arm. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Iza
