One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
An interesting poem- leading hall of metaphors -from the sky looking a the middays moon in the blue sky -down through the clouds- where earth looses its axis crying crystal tears that are meant to be diamonds- but our love will never turn to embers- good stuff- I want some lol
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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An interesting poem- leading hall of metaphors -from the sky looking a the middays moon in the blue sky -down through the clouds- where earth looses its axis crying crystal tears that are meant to be diamonds- but our love will never turn to embers- good stuff- I want some lol
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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LoL i want some too.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review,
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy,
another Gypsy special... words that float in the air to be tasted, savoured and then digested.
I found my eyes wanting to return to the page and like nourishing-tasty food you hope has one more bite left in it... i read through again. each time getting to the conclusion and stalling on the last two lines... no, not because it confused, or any other problem, but because the words drew me in and held me there.
Outstanding presentation and composition. You my Gypsy are definitely the Queen of short form.
'Crying crystals tears meant to be diamonds.
But the flames of our love
will never turn to embers.'
Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
eternal commitment.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Hi Gypsy,
another Gypsy special... words that float in the air to be tasted, savoured and then digested.
I found my eyes wanting to return to the page and like nourishing-tasty food you hope has one more bite left in it... i read through again. each time getting to the conclusion and stalling on the last two lines... no, not because it confused, or any other problem, but because the words drew me in and held me there.
Outstanding presentation and composition. You my Gypsy are definitely the Queen of short form.
'Crying crystals tears meant to be diamonds.
But the flames of our love
will never turn to embers.'
Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
eternal commitment.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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James, you are such wonderful poet that even your reviews sound like free verse... wow! you sure know how to make a girl blush. :) Thank you for the lovely review and generous rating. I really appreciate the six stars.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from kahpot
Love will never burn out, I really like the use of alliteration in this excellent Kanshi Poem, true love is eternal, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Love will never burn out, I really like the use of alliteration in this excellent Kanshi Poem, true love is eternal, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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thank you for taking the time to review my poem, my friend
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis
Comment from karenina
Sigh. Darn it all Gypsy, you do have the proverbial way with words!
I need a new thesaurus of superlatives for your work!
Each poem is a journey, and each journey is so artistically presented I'm breathless!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Sigh. Darn it all Gypsy, you do have the proverbial way with words!
I need a new thesaurus of superlatives for your work!
Each poem is a journey, and each journey is so artistically presented I'm breathless!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Karenina, thank you for taking the time to review my poem, my friend
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis
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You're welcome!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Very nice use of imagery to express the endurance and resilience of the love of the lover and the beloved. I loved the flow of the poem from clouds, to losing the earth's axis, to love's embers never dying. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Very nice use of imagery to express the endurance and resilience of the love of the lover and the beloved. I loved the flow of the poem from clouds, to losing the earth's axis, to love's embers never dying. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Theodore, thank you for taking the time to review my poem, my friend
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
I felt like I've journeyed from the sky where the ethereal clouds are down into the core of the Earth where the diamonds are being formed. It's a good way to describe true and lasting love.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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I felt like I've journeyed from the sky where the ethereal clouds are down into the core of the Earth where the diamonds are being formed. It's a good way to describe true and lasting love.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Helen, you always get my poems. Hugs & kisses
thank you for taking the time to review my poem, my friend
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
