Take Time To Pray
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pookietoo, a poem of wisdom and words to live by. Good 2-8-2 format. Great graphic choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Hi Pookietoo, a poem of wisdom and words to live by. Good 2-8-2 format. Great graphic choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thanks, the contest is over. 🙂
Comment from harmony13
This poem is lovely. The author's words have a strong message, are
descriptive and creative. I really like the message in these words. They
are all that I strongly believe in. The artwork compliments and adds
to the wonderful message in this poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This poem is lovely. The author's words have a strong message, are
descriptive and creative. I really like the message in these words. They
are all that I strongly believe in. The artwork compliments and adds
to the wonderful message in this poem.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thanks, the contest is over. :)
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
This world would certainly be a better place if people would be respectful towards one another.
We should treat people in the same way we would like to be treated : that is with kindness.
Do I pray ..but not as often as I should.
When I am troubled I speak to God and I don't feel alone.
I confess , I don t praise God enough for all the beauty I have in my life : my forests , my woods, my mountains etc.
I need to work on that part still.
Take care!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Ciao!
This world would certainly be a better place if people would be respectful towards one another.
We should treat people in the same way we would like to be treated : that is with kindness.
Do I pray ..but not as often as I should.
When I am troubled I speak to God and I don't feel alone.
I confess , I don t praise God enough for all the beauty I have in my life : my forests , my woods, my mountains etc.
I need to work on that part still.
Take care!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thanks, the contest is over. 🙂
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, Yes, we should always be kind and pray not only for ourselves but for those less fortunate, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Excellent, Yes, we should always be kind and pray not only for ourselves but for those less fortunate, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I could use your help in the contest.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I wish it was doing well in the contest.
Comment from Janet Foor
We do have so much to be thankful for. Gratitude for life itself and his blessings, mercy, faithfulness just to name a few things.
Take time to pray is good advice.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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We do have so much to be thankful for. Gratitude for life itself and his blessings, mercy, faithfulness just to name a few things.
Take time to pray is good advice.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I wish it was doing well in the contest.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The fundamentals for a joyful, meaningful life - kindness, thoughtfulness, and prayer. I like that you used words on prayer - why you should pray - instead of a picture. Seems appropriate here.
A very good entry into this contest - good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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The fundamentals for a joyful, meaningful life - kindness, thoughtfulness, and prayer. I like that you used words on prayer - why you should pray - instead of a picture. Seems appropriate here.
A very good entry into this contest - good luck!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks!
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Can you help me in the contest?
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No, we can only review. There is a committee for contest entries.
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You can vote.
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Be careful reaching out to people like this. You could be disqualified for doing so. Maybe you should pray about it:-)
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Ok
Comment from Regina Elliott
This is a truthful and wonderful prayer. I agree,
we should pray to God in
gratitude first. Very well
penned and thoughtful.
God's blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a truthful and wonderful prayer. I agree,
we should pray to God in
gratitude first. Very well
penned and thoughtful.
God's blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks!
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Can you help me in the contest?
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-8-2, Take Time to Pray, has a problem with formatting as it is right now. It is presented with four lines 2-5-3-2. The sentiment is good though and is worthy of our attention. Please fix the set up.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This 2-8-2, Take Time to Pray, has a problem with formatting as it is right now. It is presented with four lines 2-5-3-2. The sentiment is good though and is worthy of our attention. Please fix the set up.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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The poem is great. I centered it on the page!
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I bumped the review up.
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Yes I fixed it.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 2-8-2 poem for the contest
but the display of the words needs to be changed from:
Each day
be kind, thoughtful in
every way
and pray.
to:
Each day
be kind, thoughtful in every way
and pray.
Excellent use of the three rhymes.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is an excellent 2-8-2 poem for the contest
but the display of the words needs to be changed from:
Each day
be kind, thoughtful in
every way
and pray.
to:
Each day
be kind, thoughtful in every way
and pray.
Excellent use of the three rhymes.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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I centered the poem, thanks!
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Have you read my three seasons and senru poems?
