Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I can imagine that you are the star mooning the other person at will. Dark, cold and closed to light? Yeah, that sounds right. How about opposed to benightment as well. And still you are here and prospering. Go figure.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

People keep reading and say more nice things than threats. Good place to be.

reply by nomi338 on 15-Jun-2022

Yes Sir, there you go.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem described a love I never expected. "Merry moon and super star" was a great line. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thanks, Jessizero

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Bill: love the rhyme and how the poem moves along so easily. The picture catches ones eye. It makes one think a few different things; what if there were only two of us and one was not social? Would we live in peace together as the picture inspires or conflict and kills each other? So many ways to go with this. Thought provoking and beautiful. Linda

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thank you, Linda, for the great reiew. Bill