Comment from Sugarray77

Exceptional

Oh Bill, this is adorable. I love the personification and the wonderful, symbiotic relationship between your merry moon and super star. Great job on this love poem. I really like it.

Melissa

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022

Thank you so much, Melissa. Wife liked it too.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Exceptional

For whatever reason this piece resonates with me completely. As the odd man out more times than not, sorta like the comic Latka, from "Taxi", Andy Kaufman character who died too early.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks, Tom, for the exceptional review. Being self-effacing is easy for me.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That's an interesting and different love poem. Sounds like the differences are both accepted and celebrated for the balance they give each other. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks, Wendy

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem is interesting and entertaining to read. I like the simplicity of how you expressed emotion in your poem. Excellent work! I see no mistakes. Good job! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks, Raul

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Bill, this is a poem that makes you say ahh at the very end of it.
Your poem reads and flows well, and much of what you say in this poem my husband has almost said it word to word to me.

I especially liked:
You would surely be alright,
your heart and mind are big and bright;
not me, however, I'd be night:
dark and cold and closed to light.

Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thank you, LB. Your husband sounds like class act.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

I like the ying and yang relationship you express in this poem. I like that your font is large and centered on your visual. The visual fits well with the text. Your presentation is well-thought out. Well-done! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thanks, Sandra

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 15-Jun-2022

You are welcome

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I found these words to be well put together in this Love Poem! The
author's words are sweet, clear, made me smile, and are creative.
I pondered on the words of this poem and found them fun and
interesting. The artwork is unique and goes well with these words.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thank you, Harmony.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

poem
Moon and Star

Bill Schott,
your love poem is great, I love how you are saying---
'You would surely be alright,
Our hearts and mind are big and bright;

then you saying,
"not me, however, I'd be night:"

my goodness why You would surely be alright,?
and then you saying,

" why not me,however, I'd be night:
dark and cold and closed to light".
Gert

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thanks, Gert

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is a really thoughtful love poem and I hope you gave copy to Kathy!! I do think that both parties of a couple would never be the same without he other. I do like the metaphor of the moon reflecting the brightness of the beloved "super star." Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thank you, Helen. I did read it to her; she smiled.

reply by lyenochka on 15-Jun-2022

Yay! 😊💖

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Sounds like the perfect match, if there truly is such a thing. But even if not perfect, as nothing ever really is, it seems close enough to bring out jealousy or maybe a touch of envy. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

Thank you, Ric.