Bumblebee
Science says bumblebees should not be able to fly.2 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Well, I just learned something fascinating about bumblebees! You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables to convey the message that the experts really don't know everything.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Well, I just learned something fascinating about bumblebees! You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables to convey the message that the experts really don't know everything.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. I am especially happy that my short entry was able to teach!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Superb senryu! I hope it is
victorious in the competition.
My family and I love the
bumblebees, they're mild
mannered little guys that,
like you poem says, science
says can't fly. If someone tells
us we can't do something,
we prove them wrong. Many
blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Superb senryu! I hope it is
victorious in the competition.
My family and I love the
bumblebees, they're mild
mannered little guys that,
like you poem says, science
says can't fly. If someone tells
us we can't do something,
we prove them wrong. Many
blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your very kind review and generous rating. I'm glad I am not alone in seeing the gentleness of these creatures.
