Self-Delusion
Careful of those who claim they are perfect.4 total reviews
Comment from JLR
How very delightful is the union of your photo of a diamond to illustrate the perfectly executed Japanese Senryu as you reflect on human nature in an ironic or satiric vein of perhaps a woman ack fo self-awareness, Success in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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How very delightful is the union of your photo of a diamond to illustrate the perfectly executed Japanese Senryu as you reflect on human nature in an ironic or satiric vein of perhaps a woman ack fo self-awareness, Success in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide an encouraging review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Good luck in the contest. In reading this I found it creative and clever to use play-on-words.
Very well done Senryu. I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Good luck in the contest. In reading this I found it creative and clever to use play-on-words.
Very well done Senryu. I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.
Comment from Pantygynt
Now personification is not generally seen as admirable in haiku but since a senryu is all about humanity I imagine the personification rule is waived.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Now personification is not generally seen as admirable in haiku but since a senryu is all about humanity I imagine the personification rule is waived.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your read and feedback. There seems to be many rules re: haiku, but they appear to be broken often.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
No person or item are perfect in this world. The only perfect one is God. There are many people who think they are perfect. There is something wrong with them in the head. Thank you for sharing this great awareness.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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No person or item are perfect in this world. The only perfect one is God. There are many people who think they are perfect. There is something wrong with them in the head. Thank you for sharing this great awareness.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your read and feedback.
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You are welcome.
