Teardrops of a broken world
Earth teardrops24 total reviews
Comment from Frances Jean
Well said with some nice end rhyming. I love the picture accompanying your poem! Yes, it's a crazy world at the moment...so much bloodshed, anger and violence. I don't understand why the people in America won't allow gun law changes to save the lives of innocent people. Forget the so called Constitution. All these shootings is just tragic. The little children must be terrified to go to school. Thanks for sharing. Franky
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Well said with some nice end rhyming. I love the picture accompanying your poem! Yes, it's a crazy world at the moment...so much bloodshed, anger and violence. I don't understand why the people in America won't allow gun law changes to save the lives of innocent people. Forget the so called Constitution. All these shootings is just tragic. The little children must be terrified to go to school. Thanks for sharing. Franky
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from nomi338
Baby girl, I hear you. First thing to digest: When Satan the Devil encountered the perfect man and woman Ad am and Eve, his deception that led Adam and Eve to commit the first sin by humans, he in effect murdered them and all of their future children. That includes you and I. Why is the world so screwed up, God has allowed Satan to have his way until the day he decides that enough is enough. On that day Satan will be stopped ,and all of the Devils innocent victims will be restored. This does not include those who knew better but joined the Devil for what he could give them, temporary power. Think of all the powerful leaders who are no longer here. The power he gives does not last for very long. The death sentence they earn will last forever. So, hold on, do the best you can, the day of deliverance is coming.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Baby girl, I hear you. First thing to digest: When Satan the Devil encountered the perfect man and woman Ad am and Eve, his deception that led Adam and Eve to commit the first sin by humans, he in effect murdered them and all of their future children. That includes you and I. Why is the world so screwed up, God has allowed Satan to have his way until the day he decides that enough is enough. On that day Satan will be stopped ,and all of the Devils innocent victims will be restored. This does not include those who knew better but joined the Devil for what he could give them, temporary power. Think of all the powerful leaders who are no longer here. The power he gives does not last for very long. The death sentence they earn will last forever. So, hold on, do the best you can, the day of deliverance is coming.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your continuous support. ❤️
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your words paint a depressing picture of life and for me, living in Australia, the thing that stands out is the shootings, the hate crimes. Going off to school or to do some shopping and never coming home again. I hope they can find an answer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Your words paint a depressing picture of life and for me, living in Australia, the thing that stands out is the shootings, the hate crimes. Going off to school or to do some shopping and never coming home again. I hope they can find an answer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I've said it before there's a raw tone to your work. It's unique in the respect that no one can emulate the pain and the anguish you so genuinely put forth with each piece your write. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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I've said it before there's a raw tone to your work. It's unique in the respect that no one can emulate the pain and the anguish you so genuinely put forth with each piece your write. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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I appreciate your review.
Comment from Ulla
Yeah, and on and on it goes. All the shootings going on in the US is quite unbelievable. How on earth can politic and money take precedence over children's and adult's safety. How many more corpses does it take for them to see light? I loved your poem every word of it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Yeah, and on and on it goes. All the shootings going on in the US is quite unbelievable. How on earth can politic and money take precedence over children's and adult's safety. How many more corpses does it take for them to see light? I loved your poem every word of it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from godlucifer
this world is filled with pain and crime. evil persist,good is a horizon and heaven saint. the pain and crime this world go through is the pain and crime we must defeat. your poem was truly express(explained). thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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this world is filled with pain and crime. evil persist,good is a horizon and heaven saint. the pain and crime this world go through is the pain and crime we must defeat. your poem was truly express(explained). thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Teri7
Charity, This is a very well written and so very true poem you have penned. Our only hope is in Jesus Christ. This world gets worse and worse every day. So much evil going on. Thank you for sharing this insightful poem. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Charity, This is a very well written and so very true poem you have penned. Our only hope is in Jesus Christ. This world gets worse and worse every day. So much evil going on. Thank you for sharing this insightful poem. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from Aussie
Your list is long but it is true. The photo was fantastic because it complimented your poem. I would have liked you to enter this in Dear God contest. For those that have ears to hear, eyes to see cry with you for the destruction of God's beautiful World. K XX
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Your list is long but it is true. The photo was fantastic because it complimented your poem. I would have liked you to enter this in Dear God contest. For those that have ears to hear, eyes to see cry with you for the destruction of God's beautiful World. K XX
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's disturbing because it's so accurate. I don't know what's wrong with the world. It seems us humans have lost our intelligence. It's hard for me to get my head around the insane things they are doing to each other. I don't know how we're ever going to get it sorted out.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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That's disturbing because it's so accurate. I don't know what's wrong with the world. It seems us humans have lost our intelligence. It's hard for me to get my head around the insane things they are doing to each other. I don't know how we're ever going to get it sorted out.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Yes this world is falling apart.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What is with all the STILLS being used? Very superfluous, don't you think? Many can be removed and not harm the message in any way. And there's no need to double space between lines... in my opinion. Be well.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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What is with all the STILLS being used? Very superfluous, don't you think? Many can be removed and not harm the message in any way. And there's no need to double space between lines... in my opinion. Be well.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your critics.
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Not critics, I hope but critiques to help a gifted writer.
