Our Young Love
It's still in there...7 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
A beautiful poem, and a great use of S-U in the alphabet. Glad you're able to keep that young love alive. Best wishes in the ABC contest. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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A beautiful poem, and a great use of S-U in the alphabet. Glad you're able to keep that young love alive. Best wishes in the ABC contest. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
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Glad you're back & hope you're doing well. Blessings.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, I 'am so happy to see some sun on those pretty faces:"
Sometimes I see a look on your face...
Tenderness that sweeps through your
Usually benign features create
Visions of our young love
Lighting up my heart." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Yup, I 'am so happy to see some sun on those pretty faces:"
Sometimes I see a look on your face...
Tenderness that sweeps through your
Usually benign features create
Visions of our young love
Lighting up my heart." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Iza! I"m so glad you enjoyed.
Don't give up on love - we were divorced for almost a decade and God interviened. I'm not saying 'get back with your ex' at all. Just keep your heart open. :)
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely ABC, poem, Deb about the little reminders as an older couple, we see sometimes as the younger couple when love was fresh and beginning. I love this topic choice, nice one. cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely ABC, poem, Deb about the little reminders as an older couple, we see sometimes as the younger couple when love was fresh and beginning. I love this topic choice, nice one. cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Hi, Valda!
Thank you for such kind words. I can still close my eyes and see the very first time I laid eyes on this man. *sigh* He looked a little different, but so did I. lol
Thanks for reading,
Deb
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise, expressive poem gently celebrates the power of enduring, continuing love, still feeling the thrill of romance. (Did you mean to say "lightsing"?)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Your ultra-concise, expressive poem gently celebrates the power of enduring, continuing love, still feeling the thrill of romance. (Did you mean to say "lightsing"?)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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I did not! lol. I flip-flopped between 'lights up' and 'lighting up' and I guess I forgot to eliminate the 's'! Thanks for catching that (and how could I miss it!) Also thank you for the beautiful review. I do love our 'old love' and the hints of our younger hearts that it still evokes.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like young love, you manage to bring an aspect of our young lives back into the realm of today. This is beautifully written Deb, my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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There's nothing like young love, you manage to bring an aspect of our young lives back into the realm of today. This is beautifully written Deb, my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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There's nothing like old love, is there. Especially when it hints at the young love that allowed it to grow and age. Thank you for the kind comments, Roy. I appreciate the time you took to do so.
Blessing,
Deb
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Most welcome Deb
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Deb.
I enjoyed reading your heartfelt words
of love for your hubby. I like the
selection of letter used to build your
poem. I could visualize you saying
this to him. Did you share it with him?
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Your contest entry read well, Deb.
I enjoyed reading your heartfelt words
of love for your hubby. I like the
selection of letter used to build your
poem. I could visualize you saying
this to him. Did you share it with him?
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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I have not shared it yet. He's not feeling top-notch and spent the morning at the VA. (Gotta love the VA.......) But I will do so when he rouses himself later. :)
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that "young love" is still alive and well in our hearts even as our faces and bodies grow old. May we always see those "visions of young love." Great choices of challenging starting words. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Yes, that "young love" is still alive and well in our hearts even as our faces and bodies grow old. May we always see those "visions of young love." Great choices of challenging starting words. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you, weet friend. I felt like I was writing cards again! lol.I'm glad you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Blessings and hugs,
Deb
