Heaven Drenched
Love poem contest18 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is well written, composed and presented. You did a great job with the prompt, a good contest entry that I hope will do well.
The artwork is stunning and set the tone immediately.
Your writing is strong yet delicate, mirroring the sentiment left.
The rhymes flow effortlessly without force. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is well written, composed and presented. You did a great job with the prompt, a good contest entry that I hope will do well.
The artwork is stunning and set the tone immediately.
Your writing is strong yet delicate, mirroring the sentiment left.
The rhymes flow effortlessly without force. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Hello! Thank you for this lovely review! Yes, I really like that artwork too? I think it fits perfectly 😊 thanks again for taking the time to read and review!💐
Comment from livelylinda
Susanjohn: the most beautiful romantic poem I've ever read (or remember, anyway). The rhythm and rhyme are perfection. The colorful picture a beautiful accompaniment. Too many people include too many lewd words and think it is romantic. But, your wording is perfect in every line and carries, very strongly, the theme of pure love. A contest contender! Linda
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Susanjohn: the most beautiful romantic poem I've ever read (or remember, anyway). The rhythm and rhyme are perfection. The colorful picture a beautiful accompaniment. Too many people include too many lewd words and think it is romantic. But, your wording is perfect in every line and carries, very strongly, the theme of pure love. A contest contender! Linda
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hi Linda! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me such a wonderful review! I?ve written a lot of romantic poetry. And yes, personally I?d rather stay aware from anything vulgar? that?s just not me. Thanks again for stopping by!💐
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Ughhh? sorry for punctuation errors! ?. Phone?
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have written a great love story. It has so much heartfelt emotions. You tell a great story of love and passion. I enjoyed reading your post. You release the joyful experiences felt for the person in question. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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You have written a great love story. It has so much heartfelt emotions. You tell a great story of love and passion. I enjoyed reading your post. You release the joyful experiences felt for the person in question. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you kindly Carolyn 🌸 I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. 😊
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This awesome, expressive poem vividly describes romantic love at its deepest and highest! You have employed a smooth, vivid blend of figurative and literal language to convey your message.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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This awesome, expressive poem vividly describes romantic love at its deepest and highest! You have employed a smooth, vivid blend of figurative and literal language to convey your message.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you Janice for this smile- making review 😊I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.💐💐💐
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Heaven Drenched, is well-metered and rhymed to create a quick romp between lovers that embodies the thrill and rapture of the lovemaking. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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This poem, Heaven Drenched, is well-metered and rhymed to create a quick romp between lovers that embodies the thrill and rapture of the lovemaking. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Awww 6 shiny stars!✨ Thank you so much Bill 😊. Thanks for reading and leaving me such a great review 🌸
Comment from WalkerMan
This is a delight to read, as you have not written a "Discreet Heat" poem like this for a long time. The flawless iambic tetrameter maintains a suitably brisk pace, and the fully rhymed (abab) quatrains fit the theme of closely entwined lovers. This sweet poem is a welcome distraction from the stresses of our present times. Superb, and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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This is a delight to read, as you have not written a "Discreet Heat" poem like this for a long time. The flawless iambic tetrameter maintains a suitably brisk pace, and the fully rhymed (abab) quatrains fit the theme of closely entwined lovers. This sweet poem is a welcome distraction from the stresses of our present times. Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you Mike for another beautiful review. Thank you for taking the time to read and dive into this little love poem. Much appreciated 💐 😊
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You are most welcome. You vividly conveyed the desire, passion, and joy of loving without needing to apply a warning, which is the essence of "Discreet Heat." That is not an easy task, but you are a master at it. I greatly enjoyed reading it and look forward to more. This poem is a strong contender in its contest. :)) -- Mike
Comment from karenina
So well written! I thought for a moment I'd been transported back in time, to Emily or Barret-Browning, or Wordsworth or Keats!
In a world of emojis and GIFS, in a universe where most everything is shared by tweet or text, you've fully embraced the beauty of love and passion and written lines that will bear the test of time!
Kudos!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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So well written! I thought for a moment I'd been transported back in time, to Emily or Barret-Browning, or Wordsworth or Keats!
In a world of emojis and GIFS, in a universe where most everything is shared by tweet or text, you've fully embraced the beauty of love and passion and written lines that will bear the test of time!
Kudos!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Karenina! What an amazing compliment!!! Thank you so very much. You are too kind!🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Great write!
Comment from dragonpoet
Susan,
These abab quatrains show a romantic and passionate love that seems to
be of the lasting kind.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Susan,
These abab quatrains show a romantic and passionate love that seems to
be of the lasting kind.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hi Joan! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Very much appreciated 🌸🌸🌸
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You're welcome, Susan.
Joan
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I do wish I had a six this morning for this work of art. I am talking about your poem, not the picture. You are a breath of fresh air when it comes to reading a great poem. I wish we had more poets like you. Great Job. This should win. I would vote for it. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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I do wish I had a six this morning for this work of art. I am talking about your poem, not the picture. You are a breath of fresh air when it comes to reading a great poem. I wish we had more poets like you. Great Job. This should win. I would vote for it. Nancy:)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hi Nancy! Thank you again for this beautiful review and help promoting it! What a nice surprise! You really made me smile 💐💐💐💐
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well thought out, Susan. It keeps
to the idea of two in love and oblivious to the world.
The words are soft and tender as the poem progresses.
Your words create great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Your contest entry is well thought out, Susan. It keeps
to the idea of two in love and oblivious to the world.
The words are soft and tender as the poem progresses.
Your words create great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Hi Jan! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me this awesome review!! :-)
