Birdbath
Birds gather to drink, bathe and gossip.43 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
"birds gather to drink
sometimes jump in to bathe
womens' club of sorts"
Your haiku is well done, a good description of the picture you have chosen
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"birds gather to drink
sometimes jump in to bathe
womens' club of sorts"
Your haiku is well done, a good description of the picture you have chosen
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from robyn corum
Linda,
HA! That does sound familiar, doesn't it? Do the male birds have to find a different place to hang out, then? hahahaha Or just act super nice and pay a certain fee or be accompanied by a card-carrying member OR only visit on certain days? I like it!
Only one wee note, if I may:
--> womens' club of sorts
--> women's
Thanks and good luck!
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Linda,
HA! That does sound familiar, doesn't it? Do the male birds have to find a different place to hang out, then? hahahaha Or just act super nice and pay a certain fee or be accompanied by a card-carrying member OR only visit on certain days? I like it!
Only one wee note, if I may:
--> womens' club of sorts
--> women's
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces that some birds also do experience recreational times.
The work highlights these birds gathering to drink; with an occasional jumping into the water to bathe in the manner of a women's rendezvous.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the Haiku poetry format specified for the contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces that some birds also do experience recreational times.
The work highlights these birds gathering to drink; with an occasional jumping into the water to bathe in the manner of a women's rendezvous.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the Haiku poetry format specified for the contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
