Whatever?
A contest entry29 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Whatever?, follows the rules and projects the freedom of having no framing, rhyming, alliteration, or purpose to worry about. Nice.
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This poem, Whatever?, follows the rules and projects the freedom of having no framing, rhyming, alliteration, or purpose to worry about. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you Bill for reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Arir,
Excellent entry for the No Rules Poetry Contest. I'm with you, I love poems without rules.
Good free verse with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
blessed be.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
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Arir,
Excellent entry for the No Rules Poetry Contest. I'm with you, I love poems without rules.
Good free verse with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
blessed be.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Gypsy Blue Rose for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment from C.A.Currie
That about sums it all up! Nicely Done!
Thank you for teaching me about the No Rules Poem!
Good luck in the contest!
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs & Sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
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That about sums it all up! Nicely Done!
Thank you for teaching me about the No Rules Poem!
Good luck in the contest!
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs & Sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Christine for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments. I really liked your 'Hugs & Sunshine from my heart to yours'. May I friend you?
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Hey aryr! I would be honored to be friends with you! And reading your poem was my pleasure! Here's another of my favorite sign-offs:
Sunshine, Rainbows, and Unicorns from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
~ Christine ~
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Thank you so much, nice to meet you Christine, I am Alie.
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Nice to meet you too, Alie! I look forward to reading more of your writing!
Hugs, Sunshine, and Unicorns from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
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I am not sure which I like more Christine but for right now I'll stick with my own until I decided. Blessings, smiles n hugs!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and sunny presentation, aryr.
-I like your entry and approach to the topic.
-You show how much you enjoy this contest
because you like to share whatever you like
in whatever way you like, and then
just be uniquely you!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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-Nice artwork and sunny presentation, aryr.
-I like your entry and approach to the topic.
-You show how much you enjoy this contest
because you like to share whatever you like
in whatever way you like, and then
just be uniquely you!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pam for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
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You are very welcome, aryr.
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(smile)
Comment from Pantygynt
Actually of course there is no such thing as a no rules poem because the act of stating there are no rules is a rule in itself. Nevertheless you have made a good argument in favour of personal freedom.
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Actually of course there is no such thing as a no rules poem because the act of stating there are no rules is a rule in itself. Nevertheless you have made a good argument in favour of personal freedom.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pantygynt for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
This is a fine poem that carries an important message. I agree about no- rules poem prompts, though I can't help but wonder what makes a poem a poem rather than a specially formatted bit of prose. I do like to see either meter/rhythm (and/or) figurative language, hopefully with interesting vocabulary that paints a word picture. Not sure your poem has much of that, but I still am sure its a poem. I especially like the following stanza for its repetition and alliteration:
"Whatever I do
can be wherever I am
and whatever I can."
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This is a fine poem that carries an important message. I agree about no- rules poem prompts, though I can't help but wonder what makes a poem a poem rather than a specially formatted bit of prose. I do like to see either meter/rhythm (and/or) figurative language, hopefully with interesting vocabulary that paints a word picture. Not sure your poem has much of that, but I still am sure its a poem. I especially like the following stanza for its repetition and alliteration:
"Whatever I do
can be wherever I am
and whatever I can."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much K for reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like this fun poem, Ali. Perhaps a No Rules Poem is one I could attempt to write sometime. You did a good job of expressing yourself. Good luck in the contest.
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I like this fun poem, Ali. Perhaps a No Rules Poem is one I could attempt to write sometime. You did a good job of expressing yourself. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Judy for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments. I have to be inspired and when I saw this one, I couldn't resist, lol.
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You're most welcome, Ali. I'm glad you enjoyed writing this one. :)
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Go ahead and try, lol Judy.
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Mmm. not quite inspired, yet. lol
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Perhaps one day.
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Maybe, :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
And isn't that a nice feeling, Alie? I like this lovely little no rules poem, that gives us 'You.' You have used the contest well, my friend, I love the simplicity, the honesty, and the fun of it. Very well done, and good luck!! :)) Sandra xx
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And isn't that a nice feeling, Alie? I like this lovely little no rules poem, that gives us 'You.' You have used the contest well, my friend, I love the simplicity, the honesty, and the fun of it. Very well done, and good luck!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Sandra for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, and these modern days are a good way to show that poetry is basically any person's right to be anlevto make a statement on paper, of something the believe is not only helpful To themselves but others too, beautifully written Alie, blessings Roy
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Oh yes, and these modern days are a good way to show that poetry is basically any person's right to be anlevto make a statement on paper, of something the believe is not only helpful To themselves but others too, beautifully written Alie, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Roy for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments. It is rarely that I enter a contest, it has to inspire me first, lol. Blessings.
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Most welcome Alie,
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Thank you Roy. Blessings.
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Most welcome
Comment from Whitewave
Aryr,
You have demonstrated a fun use of the No Rules poem. You have skillfully created and mixed a rainbow of colors and simple words to show what you want to show and be what you want to be, without any rules.
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Aryr,
You have demonstrated a fun use of the No Rules poem. You have skillfully created and mixed a rainbow of colors and simple words to show what you want to show and be what you want to be, without any rules.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Whitewave for reviewing and your great comments.
