Baby in Blue
Favorite grandson's first born son due in September.67 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh! I'monly a few years from this experience. My granddaughter is leaving for college this fall and we're hoping for no babies for a few years. But then... Yes! Anticipation1
This should do so well in the contest! I love it and it gave me beautiful memories of helping deliver my grandchildren and an excitement about the future of our family. :)
Blessings,
Deb
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Oh! I'monly a few years from this experience. My granddaughter is leaving for college this fall and we're hoping for no babies for a few years. But then... Yes! Anticipation1
This should do so well in the contest! I love it and it gave me beautiful memories of helping deliver my grandchildren and an excitement about the future of our family. :)
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
Comment from MissMerri
Yes... such a great idea for a short poem. Straight to the point with a theme that is sure to arouse emotions in many hearts who know exactly what you're talking about. Excellent entry for this contest. I loved it! MM
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Yes... such a great idea for a short poem. Straight to the point with a theme that is sure to arouse emotions in many hearts who know exactly what you're talking about. Excellent entry for this contest. I loved it! MM
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Susanjohn
Well congratulations!! A new blessing indeed! September will be here soon enough... along with a precious baby boy! Perfectly expressed and presented. :-)
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Well congratulations!! A new blessing indeed! September will be here soon enough... along with a precious baby boy! Perfectly expressed and presented. :-)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Gert sherwood
Favorite grandson's first born son due in September.
Baby in Blue
livelylinda
How nice, I know how you feel, I was the same way (happy) when my first Great Grand (baby girl) and more so when I was gifted with another
Great Grand (baby girl)
Smiles
Gert
Gert
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Favorite grandson's first born son due in September.
Baby in Blue
livelylinda
How nice, I know how you feel, I was the same way (happy) when my first Great Grand (baby girl) and more so when I was gifted with another
Great Grand (baby girl)
Smiles
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this. It is a great entry for the 6 word poetry competition. It tellls a complete story. Been there. Done that
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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I really like this. It is a great entry for the 6 word poetry competition. It tellls a complete story. Been there. Done that
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Chris Davis
What beautiful sentiment captured in this piece. Also, the illustration is perfect not only in verse but the photo imagery as well. Thank you for sharing the poem.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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What beautiful sentiment captured in this piece. Also, the illustration is perfect not only in verse but the photo imagery as well. Thank you for sharing the poem.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Chris, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Sally Law
How wonderful, dear Linda! Welcome back and welcome baby boy! An exciting time of great anticipation.
Sending you my best today as always and best regards to you all,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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How wonderful, dear Linda! Welcome back and welcome baby boy! An exciting time of great anticipation.
Sending you my best today as always and best regards to you all,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Sally. Getting old and have been basically ill for the last 3 years. Linda
Comment from Pantygynt
Here we have six well-chosen words here and well done managing to work that excellent rhyming pair of words awaited/anticipated into the poem in addition.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Here we have six well-chosen words here and well done managing to work that excellent rhyming pair of words awaited/anticipated into the poem in addition.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. Linda
Comment from Wendy G
How exciting for you! Sounds like this one is already a much loved baby! Beautifully written. Sending my best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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How exciting for you! Sounds like this one is already a much loved baby! Beautifully written. Sending my best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Wendy for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Michele Harber
First off, congratulations on your great-grandson's upcoming birth. It's very hard to say much in just six words, but you've used yours to establish a situation and express very palpable emotion. In addition, I enjoyed your use of the "awaited"/"anticipated" rhyme.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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First off, congratulations on your great-grandson's upcoming birth. It's very hard to say much in just six words, but you've used yours to establish a situation and express very palpable emotion. In addition, I enjoyed your use of the "awaited"/"anticipated" rhyme.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Michele. for reading and commenting. This little poem wrote itself, very quickly! Linda
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Not surprising, Great Grandma. Your excitement is infectious.
