"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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2 total reviews
Comment from jp88
I enjoyed reading these two. They flow well, which makes them a pleasure to read.
"Well then just do the right thing!" this is the only line where I struggled with the rhythm while reading.
Otherwise, flawless, and conveys strong emotion!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed reading these two. They flow well, which makes them a pleasure to read.
"Well then just do the right thing!" this is the only line where I struggled with the rhythm while reading.
Otherwise, flawless, and conveys strong emotion!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Why thank you so much.
If you enjoyed those two you'll enjoy my newest entitled, "Just Zero Chill!"
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like the playful tone you have here, pairing beater with meter, for example, and using that to hammer home your points. Some great word choices in here, and a great fun read overall.
Mike
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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I like the playful tone you have here, pairing beater with meter, for example, and using that to hammer home your points. Some great word choices in here, and a great fun read overall.
Mike
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thanks Michael and be sure to catch my latest heart poem entitled,
"Just Zero Chill!"
It will leave you speechless!
Doctor Ricky 1024