Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

This is very charming and
whimsical. I love the theme
of rose-hued glasses. My
late husband, in the beginning
of our going out, had rose-
hued glasses. Have a creative
weekend!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like the image of your muse in her rose-colored glasses. You did a good job expressing this in a few syllables. Thanks for sharing this here. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from NataliaDøtz

Good

This sounds like a lovely start to a poem. Couldn't help but wonder it felt more like a statement than a thought out stanza to be made out as a type of poem. Maybe explain and go in depth on the topic? Otherwise I adored it! :))

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks for sharing zanya