The businesswoman
danger19 total reviews
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Congratulations for putting up so much resistance against the evil onslaught of Coronella that earned your work its categorization as a worthy entry for the "You are not welcome" writing prompt.
Your work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with Ene Henshaw's work: "The Incorruptible Judge."
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Congratulations for putting up so much resistance against the evil onslaught of Coronella that earned your work its categorization as a worthy entry for the "You are not welcome" writing prompt.
Your work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with Ene Henshaw's work: "The Incorruptible Judge."
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review and now I am currious to read the work you mentioned:)
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Remain Blessed.
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Remain Blessed.
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Thanks for nominating me. I appreciate it. Remain Blessed.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm guessing that I really wouldn't want to make you mad, as you are obviously quick witted and ready to spare if the occasion should arise to use it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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I'm guessing that I really wouldn't want to make you mad, as you are obviously quick witted and ready to spare if the occasion should arise to use it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your funny review:)
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is really well written, Iza. You kept us guessing for a while about who this woman was. We should have known it would be your friend, Coronella! lol Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This is really well written, Iza. You kept us guessing for a while about who this woman was. We should have known it would be your friend, Coronella! lol Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you and you made me laugh:)
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You're most welcome, Iza. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, The Businesswoman, personifies the virus, I think, and gets "her" through the usual barriers and into our lives. We will hopefully be more aware next time.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This story, The Businesswoman, personifies the virus, I think, and gets "her" through the usual barriers and into our lives. We will hopefully be more aware next time.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you:)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Not quite sure what fengshui may be but if you don't want it neither do I.
I assume, even knowing the danger of that word, She is a disease that when unlocked caused lots of havoc?
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Not quite sure what fengshui may be but if you don't want it neither do I.
I assume, even knowing the danger of that word, She is a disease that when unlocked caused lots of havoc?
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Agreed with you on this one, Mr. Tom:)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I like the conversational approach of describing the onset of a "pandemic."
One observation:
3rd Para, 10th sentence: remove one space between "perish" and "."
If only it were as easy, though difficult, as your tale seems to imply, if only.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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I like the conversational approach of describing the onset of a "pandemic."
One observation:
3rd Para, 10th sentence: remove one space between "perish" and "."
If only it were as easy, though difficult, as your tale seems to imply, if only.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Hi Gray thank you kindly for your review:) space nihilated
Comment from Whitewave
Iza,
This is a really clever take on a most unwelcome visitor which has been given universal freedoms, to the detriment of humanity. It is amazing how it 'managed to fool the greedy politicians, and they let her waltz her way across continents and fake democracy'.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Iza,
This is a really clever take on a most unwelcome visitor which has been given universal freedoms, to the detriment of humanity. It is amazing how it 'managed to fool the greedy politicians, and they let her waltz her way across continents and fake democracy'.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review, and yes she turned our world upside down
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Most people can agree that the coronavirus is the worse in the whole wide world. It's a great entry for the You are not welcome writing prompt contest. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Most people can agree that the coronavirus is the worse in the whole wide world. It's a great entry for the You are not welcome writing prompt contest. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Hello my dear friend thank you so much for stopping by and for the good wishes:) It's a honor to have you reviewing my work
Comment from royowen
Ah, I was beginning to wonder who the beguiling, but malevolent female was, but you have enlightened me now, I think this is one of the best stories I've read of yours, still earthbound, but definitely different, an excellent job Iza, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : The reset (is) a prisoner
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Ah, I was beginning to wonder who the beguiling, but malevolent female was, but you have enlightened me now, I think this is one of the best stories I've read of yours, still earthbound, but definitely different, an excellent job Iza, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : The reset (is) a prisoner
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Good Afternoon and thank you so much for your kind review, it means so much to me that you take the time to read my posts:)
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Most welcome Iza
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Well, I was wondering who this businesswoman could be. Now I know it is the disease Covid. You spun this tale in a creative and unusual manner. I like it. I wasn't sure what you meant by this line ~egocentric racist, so she better keep her fengshui away????
Some may not get this piece in the contest, but they would if you mention her name before the very last paragraph. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Well, I was wondering who this businesswoman could be. Now I know it is the disease Covid. You spun this tale in a creative and unusual manner. I like it. I wasn't sure what you meant by this line ~egocentric racist, so she better keep her fengshui away????
Some may not get this piece in the contest, but they would if you mention her name before the very last paragraph. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for the suggestion:) I wish you a wonderful day
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You are welcome.