Whispers In My Mind
Ideas just pop into my head9 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem is simple and grabbed me. There is nothing like that feeling inside when you know you did a good job writing. But I still don't know how we get there and it surprises me.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Your poem is simple and grabbed me. There is nothing like that feeling inside when you know you did a good job writing. But I still don't know how we get there and it surprises me.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you! Me, too!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I like this. The girl in the picture looks like a muse. The personification of your muse and her naughtiness are amusing. (no pun intended) I hope this does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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I like this. The girl in the picture looks like a muse. The personification of your muse and her naughtiness are amusing. (no pun intended) I hope this does well in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
That is exactly how I see a muse materializing. We invoke our muse ourselves. If we can't summon ours for inspiration, we blame it on "writers block". No matter, your muse will always be there just waiting to be needed.
It doesn't take a lot to appease a muse.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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That is exactly how I see a muse materializing. We invoke our muse ourselves. If we can't summon ours for inspiration, we blame it on "writers block". No matter, your muse will always be there just waiting to be needed.
It doesn't take a lot to appease a muse.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Good one. And the main thing is that you are enjoying your writing, and both you and your muse are happy. These muses are elusive, and sometimes they don't speak very clearly in my experience. Well done, and best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Good one. And the main thing is that you are enjoying your writing, and both you and your muse are happy. These muses are elusive, and sometimes they don't speak very clearly in my experience. Well done, and best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were interesting, descriptive, confusing and
creative. I enjoyed the read of this poem - I liked the last line
which ended my confusion! The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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The author's words were interesting, descriptive, confusing and
creative. I enjoyed the read of this poem - I liked the last line
which ended my confusion! The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Tjank you very much
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from jessizero
It definitely sounds like your muse is a mischievous muse at least. I am happy she is pleased, and that it pleases you. Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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It definitely sounds like your muse is a mischievous muse at least. I am happy she is pleased, and that it pleases you. Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thanks. I appreciate your review.
Comment from RodG
I like how you personify your Muse as sort of a tease who whispers in your ear and the ensuing teamwork. Good description of the stages of your writing. May she keep whispering to you. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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I like how you personify your Muse as sort of a tease who whispers in your ear and the ensuing teamwork. Good description of the stages of your writing. May she keep whispering to you. Rod
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Rod.
Comment from RainbewLatte
I loved this, the flow, the wonders, and the story it brings. Repeating something purposefully and with reason forced me to but also allowed me to have the space to think and really wonder about the depth it held. I can only say that the closing lines are truly something and I just love the way it makes one feel. Thank you so much for sharing and wherever that artwork came from, it's truly such a beauty. Thank you. All the best, much love, and have the best day!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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I loved this, the flow, the wonders, and the story it brings. Repeating something purposefully and with reason forced me to but also allowed me to have the space to think and really wonder about the depth it held. I can only say that the closing lines are truly something and I just love the way it makes one feel. Thank you so much for sharing and wherever that artwork came from, it's truly such a beauty. Thank you. All the best, much love, and have the best day!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much,
