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Muse Lost in the Library

All the inspiring places I searched for my lost muse

11 total reviews 
Comment from jaded831
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You can find your muse in so many places, but I believe he finds you. But we all need that spark to get him going, once there, look out. Sometimes I think we try to hard in our search. Along with you, I wish my muse would always be by my side.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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This is so good that I couldn't find one tiny little thing that I would change. What a fun read and so entertaining! I wish l had a six star to give you as it would be so deserved! So thank you mystery author as your poem is delightful and I wish you best of luck, as you should do well in the contest. Fun fun fun!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much for you excellent review.
Comment from zanya
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An interesting and elusive Muse portrayed here in these stanzas - likely to return bursting with new ideas and literary paths to follow- a Muse who is truly a busy bee!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
    Thank you very much for an excellent review.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Look behind you. I think your muse is right there because someone or something must have inspired you to write this entertaining little puzzle of a work. It fairly dances right off the page onto my tongue.

Very fun read.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much. I loved your review!
Comment from Wendy G
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This was a very well written poem, with excellent rhyme and metre - and an imaginative story-line as you took us on a trip through the library in search of the missing muse. However, may I declare that your muse is absolutely not missing! He must have been in your pocket all along. Well done A great entry for the contest, and I am sure you will have success.
Wendy

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much for a great review and your confidence!
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is an excellent and fun verse to read. I adore libraries and you hit all of the high spots about where your muse might have wandered off to hide. Great job on this and you have my vote!

Melissa

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thanks for he lovely review and your vote!
Comment from LisaMay
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Those naughty muses do like to play mischief with us - yours probably ran off to play with mine and left you looking for him. Please don't chain him up though - they like to be free spirits.
It'll teach him a lesson that you are perfectly capable of writing a fun poem without his input - I enjoyed this.

I lost the rhythm a bit with this line:
'I browsed amid tomes classical'

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much for your excellent review.
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I very much enjoyed following along as you searched through the library for that elusive, naughty muse :-). It's always when we think there's nothing to write about that the brain seems to kick in. For me, anyway! Thanks for the entertaining piece.

Mike

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 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thanks for a great review!
Comment from leather
Exceptional
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I am so sorry for the loss of your muse. However, you are to be commended for your diligent but fruitless search. To help compensate for your misfortune, you are being awarded a six-star rating. I loved your poem and the way you went on your search. Very clever and entertaining.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you so very much for a great review and a lovely rating!
Comment from RodG
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a terrific poem describing the Speaker's search for his missing Muse. I really like how you PUT US THERE in the library looking through all those books in your quest to find him. Your flawless meter and 4/3/4/3 quatrains earned this a 6-star rating. Rod

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    This wonderful review please me greatly! Thank you!
reply by RodG on 08-Jun-2022
    You are very welcome.