An Acrostic-(when I said no)
No means No16 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a beautiful piece! Yes, bars will not hold back the constant torment forced upon the victim. I cannot and do not want to imagine lifelong mental and physical pain. Great write.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful piece! Yes, bars will not hold back the constant torment forced upon the victim. I cannot and do not want to imagine lifelong mental and physical pain. Great write.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, no I don't think the mental scars will ever fade, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from prettybluebirds
Children are so often victims of predators and unable to do anything about it. Your poem is a lovely tribute to all those who have suffered abuse in their childhood. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Children are so often victims of predators and unable to do anything about it. Your poem is a lovely tribute to all those who have suffered abuse in their childhood. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were suspenseful until the last line. Thank you for
the author's notes - they speak volumes! I found these words expressed
with details and intense feelings. The artwork is well chosen and
compliments the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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The author's words were suspenseful until the last line. Thank you for
the author's notes - they speak volumes! I found these words expressed
with details and intense feelings. The artwork is well chosen and
compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Kahpot, a poem of truth and a poem and message that must be heard and shared. Your message is poignant and clear. Of special note:
I bared that shame, in words of tears.
(Sadly, this is her only recourse. She get's to live with this atrocity
while evil goes free.)
A powerful writing. Well-chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Kahpot, a poem of truth and a poem and message that must be heard and shared. Your message is poignant and clear. Of special note:
I bared that shame, in words of tears.
(Sadly, this is her only recourse. She get's to live with this atrocity
while evil goes free.)
A powerful writing. Well-chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LisaMay
Words are only powerful when they are heard and listened to. 'No means No' has taken a long time to be listened to for some predators bent on sexual connection.
Your poem shares an all too common story in a creative way. The acrostic flows well. This line is very emotive: 'I bared that shame, in words of tears'.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Words are only powerful when they are heard and listened to. 'No means No' has taken a long time to be listened to for some predators bent on sexual connection.
Your poem shares an all too common story in a creative way. The acrostic flows well. This line is very emotive: 'I bared that shame, in words of tears'.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments and Yes, No means No, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your powerful poem, Kahpot.
The rhymes worked well, the color scheme is perfect
as is the art choice. What stands out is the message
which comes through for all involved and for anyone
in the same predicament. Words are powerful.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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You did a great job with your powerful poem, Kahpot.
The rhymes worked well, the color scheme is perfect
as is the art choice. What stands out is the message
which comes through for all involved and for anyone
in the same predicament. Words are powerful.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
