Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet. you have two votes now.

I enjoy listening to birds singing .. I wake to their merry song ... great way to start the day.

Don't know how people can actually be happy living in the city. I guess they can google bird songs and listen to that ( wink)

I love your closing line very poetic and it reminded me of my ex-boss' pine tree that she had to cut down for safety measures ( needed a crane) ..it was literally, vibrating with birds chirping and whistling.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022

Thanks for your review, comments, and vote Tempeste!

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

It seems that the nightingale's songfest is so delightful that even the trees sway to the music. Your poem evokes a feeling of enjoying nature peacefully, accompanied by music.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

LisaMay,

Thanks for your review. Pleased this post gave you a song for your mind.

reply by LisaMay on 07-Jun-2022

Yes it did.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is a beautiful entry for the Ode 5-7-5 contest. I can envision it all in my head. And what a fantastically adorable little bird. :)

Have a great evening.
Erika

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thanks Erika for your review.

Sleep with a song in your heart!