Comment from Quoiky

Exceptional

I loved your poem, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I also wish you fifty more years of happiness. My husband and I have just celebrated our 51st.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022

Loved your response, of course. 6 stars are rare--and wonderful. Thanks for reading and responding.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good descriptive words and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing how
important a good relationship is.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022

Thanks, again, for reading my work.

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Jun-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, this is what I can an ooh-la-la poem. In eight syllables, you created a vivid, romantic picture. I especially liked:

soul-searching heartfelt kiss
(Oh, what a night!)

This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022

Thanks for reading and responding.