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Earth's Magnificent Moon

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "June's Strawberry Moon"
Poems, stories and fact about about our moon.

26 total reviews 
Comment from C.A.Currie
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Hey BETHSHELBY! A very nice poem and I am very impressed with not only the imagery but also the information that made your poem that much more special.
And that picture is GORGEOUS! Very nicely illustrates how, as you mentioned, taking a picture of other objects can make the moon seem closer/bigger.
I love that I am learning more than just about writing/poetry!
Thank you for all the time it took to research and especially for sharing.
Hugs & Sunshine from my heart to yours!
~ Christine ~

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much Christine. I'm so glad you like this. I really enjoyed reading you nice comments. I truly appreciate the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I love that you followed up your beautifully rhymed poem with a lesson on the super moon. This is unique and appreciated as part of your poem's story, and not just as author's notes.

Here in St. Augustine, FL, the full moon - in conjunction with rain, storm surge, etc. - often plays a part in the flooding of our downtown. It's beautiful and destructive.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you for a great review and comments. I'm glad you like the poem and additional info. That's bad timing for the storms coming in while the moon is full.
    Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have never seen a strawberry moon, although I have heard of them and you brought them to life for me here in your exceptional write Beth. Great flow and rhymes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you Dolly. I really appreciate the review and comments. If you've ever seen the moon in June, you've seen a strawberry moon. That is just a name. This year the strawberry moon will be a super moon because it will extra big and bright.
    Beth
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Thank you so much for sharing this interesting piece that contains lots of information that I didn't know. I laugh reading this passage: "f you're into Astrology, you might like to know the moon is said to be stationed in Sagittarius and Sagittarians are considered the explorers of the zodiac, so you may get a bad case of wanderlust during the full moon. Mid-June supposedly brings on an array of opportunities, bright ideas, and good fortune The free-spirited fire sign is all about seizing the moment and expanding your mind and heart According to what I've read, the full moon is the ultimate time to manifest your most sophisticated and cosmopolitan dreams. Since I know little about Astrology, make of this what you will.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you for reviewing this. All I know about Astrology is I'm a Virgo and I'm suppose to be extremely organized and nothing could be further from the truth. LOL
Comment from tfawcus
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An interesting poem eulogising the Strawberry Moon. I enjoyed it and the notes you have added with explanations of what various people around the world call this mid-summer phenomenon.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you Tony, I appreciate the review and comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Beth
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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You have composed this poem heartily, telling your fascination about the June Strawberry Moon; and I find you have used some artistic imagery as the taletelling is in a free flow of thoughts; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you for the review. I'm so glad you are still reviewing my posts.
    Beth
Comment from Whitewave
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Beth'
I find your post full of fun and information, I am not really into astrology but do have a fascination for the moon and other heavenly bodies. I love the picture you have chosen to complement your words.
Actually, I have enrolled in a Hay House presentation - Free Virtual Moonology Event with Yasmin Boland - so hopefully I will soon know more than I do right now.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you again for reading another of my posts. The moon is interesting and by writing about it, I'm learned things I didn't know.
    Beth
Comment from Teri7
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Beth, This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned about the June Strawberry Moon. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
    Thank you Teri, I really appreciate your review and comments.
    Beth
Comment from royowen
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Even in my pre God aware days, I noticed the incredible inconsistencies of astrology so I classified it as bunkum, perhaps I didn't want to to believe in anything that was indifferent to sentience, beautifully written dear Beth, excellent writing, and thanks for the info, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
    Thanks Roy. I pay not attention to Astrology but some find it fun. I hope they don't really believe it. My sign said I was supposed to be extremely organized and nothing could be further from the truth.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 07-Jun-2022
    Mine is at odds with me too.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I should have stopped with the poem. Not because the rest wasn't interesting but there are so many others to read, where will I find the time, unless... I leave my shades up and read by the light of the moon. :-)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
    Thank you Tom, I do appreciate the review whether you stop with the poem or not. I get behind with reviewing as well.
    Beth
reply by Tom Horonzy on 07-Jun-2022
    I read it all