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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 136 "The King"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

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Comment from John Ciarmello
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A delightful piece! You're right about when is enough. I guess we are not the ones to imagine. We have no control over anything except ourselves, which is often in question. Great Job, Iza

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

Comment from LJbutterfly
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Your story is interesting and frightening. I am deathly afraid of the virus, any name they call it. I have an autoimmune disorder and would not fare well if I became sick. I keep the free covid test kits handy. Who is in charge? I'll be glad when they are out of power.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
    I am so sorry that you have to go through all of this craziness
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
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You go, girl!!! Love the rant, the tongue-in-cheekiness, the outrage and the ease of getting from a to z with your logic-- curses on the King!!!! and don't touch my kitties!!!... I look forward to more !!!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much:) you should try the Masks out:) or my book of scripts based on Omnicron and Coronella:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, Iza, it seems we go from one pandemic to the next. I know
the peoples of the world are so tired of this, but here comes
another one. You did a great job expressing your thoughts and
feelings. the image is perfect.

May I suggest ~

Did HE give you a carte balanche [ blanche] to trim our numbers?

I think God laughs on[ at ] your petty attempts to be in charge. Watch out, HE will be back and you will end up on the black list spending an eternity in Hell- yeah!

First was the oldies, now are the backwards people. What's next? Take our first and last born? No, Sir! Don't touch my kitties! When[ is this ] this is going to end? Why are you imposing your egomaniac will on us? I know we are like the grain[ grains of sand ] of sands in your hourglass. Right! One more hour and let's turn the page. You build[built ] your Arc [ Ark ], and because you are bored decided to play chess with our lives.

Le jeux sont fais! The king takes it all! Checkmate! But, just so you know I WILL BE BACK, mother fortune!

Respectfully, Jan




 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

Comment from Ric Myworld
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ROFL! Yes, what will it be next. The old saying, "if one don't get you, the other one will." I went for two years without a Covid shot and never stopped going and doing whatever I wanted. Then, in consideration for everyone else, I got two shots and a booster. Then, I got Covid. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
    Cheers, I guess the booster was a overdid:) sorry for Covid, but look at the bright side you now have the pretty cells to keep you healthy
Comment from Judy Lawless
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I haven't been paying much attention to the news lately. Reading this, I feel like I must have missed something Iza. What is it that has you so upset again? We are doing pretty well where I live.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
    Well somebody has to complain, so why not poor me:)
reply by Judy Lawless on 18-Jun-2022
    Ha, ha!
Comment from Whitewave
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Iza,
Your fictional satire is clear and clever, but sadly all too real.
The game of chess with our lives has been an almost unbelievable series of false moves and we the pawns in the game of power, politics and money. It is time for Checkmate and the wicked players to be removed completely from the board.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
    You are so right, but God sees them all:)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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chapter in the book The Corona saga
The King

Iza Deleanu
Great writing and this part opened my eyes----
First was the oldies, now are the backwards people. What's next? Take our first and last born? No, Sir! Don't touch my kitties.
Gert

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

Comment from lyenochka
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I understand your rant. It feels like it never ends! And now I heard there is such a rise in Covid in Hawaii and I have to go help my parents again so when will it end? Sigh.

cart balanch (carte blanche)
You build your Arc, (Ark) as in Noah?
and because you are bored [you] decided to play chess with our lives.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

Comment from royowen
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Nobody but nobody can take Carte Blanche in life, not even me, you or the Queen of England, if they do, they'll find they're in more than hot water my friend...or worse, Iza, well done, blessings Roy
Typo (Cart(e) Bl(a)lanch(e)

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
    Thank you for your review, and it seems like our pain have no end:(
reply by royowen on 06-Jun-2022
    A fine write Iza, I admire you, I?m not very good at Rumanian