One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
Like your poem-
Oorah- Marine Corps
Hooyah- Navy & Coast Guard
Hooah- Army-Air Force-Space Force -
Troops in picture- ground forces probably- Marines - army - Special forces teams. ?? FYI hug
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Like your poem-
Oorah- Marine Corps
Hooyah- Navy & Coast Guard
Hooah- Army-Air Force-Space Force -
Troops in picture- ground forces probably- Marines - army - Special forces teams. ?? FYI hug
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, AP. It's always nice to hear from you and I appreciate your kind review and feedback. I corrected Oorah.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -- Novalis
Comment from aryr
This was a great Six Feet Under, Gypsy. The picture of the soldiers was unfortunately a sad event. Vietnam was cruel to the soldiers. I can truly fathom the meaning, death was kind to them. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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This was a great Six Feet Under, Gypsy. The picture of the soldiers was unfortunately a sad event. Vietnam was cruel to the soldiers. I can truly fathom the meaning, death was kind to them. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. You are very kind. Hugs and blessings.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy and war is anything but glorious, but no one bothered to tell that to the military brass or most politicians who keep sending young men and women to give their all
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy and war is anything but glorious, but no one bothered to tell that to the military brass or most politicians who keep sending young men and women to give their all
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and your insightful feedback.
Gypsy ♡
"If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it."
?Elmore Leonard
Comment from lyenochka
Even the wind has taken on the battle cry. That was such a horrific war and there are many controversial decisions surrounding it. Still we should honor those who served in it. Thanks for helping us to think and remember.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Even the wind has taken on the battle cry. That was such a horrific war and there are many controversial decisions surrounding it. Still we should honor those who served in it. Thanks for helping us to think and remember.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Yes, I tried to keep it neutral but I agree with you. It was very political and the poor soldiers were not treated well when they came back.
Thank you very much, Helen. I always appreciate your insightful and kind reviews. Peace and Love.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from royowen
I'm afraid our joint nations have been guilty of these militaristic crimes a few times, our anger at Russia isn't different from that, the folk it's inflicted on are the innocent as well as the guilty, well done, blessings Roy,
Typo : echo(e) echoes the plural
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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I'm afraid our joint nations have been guilty of these militaristic crimes a few times, our anger at Russia isn't different from that, the folk it's inflicted on are the innocent as well as the guilty, well done, blessings Roy,
Typo : echo(e) echoes the plural
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a great job in crafting a poem around these parameters and keeping the emotional level high. You are so adept at crafting and writing these types of poems. Well done, Gypsy!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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You did a great job in crafting a poem around these parameters and keeping the emotional level high. You are so adept at crafting and writing these types of poems. Well done, Gypsy!!
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your insightful and kind review, especially coming from you.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis