Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This story/poem was beautiful. I read it several times, and I'm still not sure I completely understand it, but I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, anyway! Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022

Thanks for the read and review. So pleased you enjoyed the poem. The two shared a reflection of togetherness and are now spending their life together.

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A well structured poem. The metaphor works well and is consistent throughout. The language is warm and conversational. The poem stays on point and flows well.


Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022

Thank you for the good read and the encouraging feedback. Appreciated.

reply by dellsworthpoet on 05-Jun-2022

You are welcome.